(#) KobraBlaze 2012-03-27Really really really good. I loved how Pete just knew what Mikey was about to do. Giving a sense that he attempted before??? I don't know but it was just an excellent story and I loved everything about it.
Author's responseThank you very much, I haven't written in a while so it's a real relief to know that you think it's alright! In my mind when I wrote this I kinda pictured Pete as having attempted it before, so it's cool that you thought that too. Thank you soooo much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :)
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-03-28YAY! I get back from a half-assed vacation with no wifi and find that you wrote something new and amazing and adorable! I love how descriptive you make Mikey about Pete; it just makes it so realistic. Now to read your other new story!
Author's responseI hope you had gun on your holiday!
Thank you very much, I'm soooo glad that you think this was alright, I haven't written for a while so I was worried that this was worse than crap. :)
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