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Translations of Blood
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-03-31
Yusss first review!! >:D I get way too much joy from the little things.
Anyways, yeah, this is incredible. I love it to bits and it's only the third second chapter. Writing is descriptive but not overdone, Frank's character is totally relateable while Gerard's is intriguing. I can't wait to read his side of the story, I bet it'll rock just as hard.
Keep going! This is already on my favourites :)
SFAuthor's response
Thank you so much! :D I really value your opinion 'cause you're a really great writer :L I missed a little bit out with the bit about Gerard on TV, sorry- it's up now if you want to check it out, but it's not particularly relevant, I guess.
Thanks so much for supporting my stories, it means a lot :D
CosmicZombie xoTranslations of Blood
(#) LanaKrueger 2012-03-31
Amazing! When I was reading this chapter, I felt like I was there, in Frank's house, watching TV with him :] You're so talented and creative, the members of MCR would be proud of you :]Author's response
Thank you so much, that's such a huge compliment!Translations of Blood
(#) FabulousRevenge 2012-03-31
Agh! Why is everything you write so damn good? I wasn't sure if I'd like this at first; I know its quite different to your usual stuff, but after this chapter I already love it!!! Seriously, you're incredible, I don't know how you manage to keep three brilliant stories with such different plots all going at the same time! Like LanaKrueger said, My Chemical Romance would be proud :)
~ Abigail EveTranslations of Blood
(#) destinationdestroya 2012-04-01
I fucking love this so much, you're such an amazing writer, this is so well written!Author's response
Aww, thank you so much! :D
CosmicZombie xoTranslations of Blood
(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-04-01
I did like it, quite a bit. (It's too early in the morning for me to be hyper about anything, sorry.)
I think that there was emphasis on certain points that made it beautiful butARE YOU HAVING A LOVE AFFAIR EIH THE WORD BEDRAGGED (or whatever that word was...)?!? You used it like seven times in the previous chapter and a bit in this one too... For what it's worth, I think we need a new word. (Eh... Yeah.) and it's/its got a bit messy.
Eh... Sorry it's not a sunshine review, but I think you're a great author and those little mechanics improvements could make reading just that much easier, make you just that much better. (see? I'm not just a bitch it's constructive! Um... Sorry bout that.)
Well, I do really like the story and am eager to see where it goes!Author's response
Thanks, glad you liked it (:
And yes, yes I am having a love affair with the word 'bedraggled' ;D
I think that's a bit of an exaggeration- I know I used it a couple times in the first chapter, but I did edit that. And I only used it once in this...but yeah, I get your drift- sorry!
Thanks, I do appreciate constructive criticism (: Will update soon!
CosmicZombie xo
P.S. Where were the it's/its so I can fix them? I looked through and only spotted one.Translations of Blood
(#) ThanksChemVenom 2012-04-01
This is such an interesting story! Very well written good job.Translations of Blood
(#) aweirdtree 2012-04-01
oh goddammit fucking shit - this is just amazing. it's just so, so... i can't even -
GAAAAAH, THANK YOUUUUU!! so fucking much!!
...krhm, yeah. sorry, went a bit hyper - but, seriously, this stuff is purely awesome. i enjoyed reading it so much that i was practically jumping up and down on my chair, lol - am so glad no one couldn't see me (hopefully). your writing is fucking amazing in this story and the plot is just sucking me in, i want to know more, goddammit! :D so please, update soon if you can (:Translations of Blood
(#) c-o-c-a-i-n-e 2012-04-01
My love for serial killers is calling me in, so I had to read this.
It seems interesting enough, I like it :D
Update soon, please?
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