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• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) oldsarge 2012-04-02

  So glad to see you back! Wow congrats on the baby! I agree, they are quite the interruption in your life. I hope the baby and wife are doing well.
  
  I guess I'm kind of weird, I don't care about the details of your story. It looks like you are writing it for fun of what is going on in the story. I am certainly having fun with it. I'm still happy with the flaming veela thing. Anyway, a lot more action going on. I hope a few explanations might be forthcoming on how Harry kind of decimated a lot of aurors and is still wandering around afterwards. And why nobody bothered to tell him about the 2nd task starting. Anyway, thanks for another eventful chapter. I'll eagerly await who happens to get in Harry's sights next.

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) DnG 2012-04-02

  Hello:
  
  Wow, its been a long time, but well worth the wait. I think a little healing time, followed by a little R an r at the tropical paradise is in order. And I think that a complete set of pensive memories are in order, to be sent to the right people to bring charges against certain people. And when is Harry going to finally figure out that Moody isn't Moody? The doubts have been raised, now all Harry has to do is sit and ponder on it, and what better time to do it, then while getting better.
  Plus a little one on one time with Hermione is definitely in order, don't you think. And I can picture an irate Sirius, Remus, Mr. and Mrs. Granger taking matters into their own hands. A little warfare of their own, so to speak, once the kids share their story with the adults. You want violence, there it is...kill them all, starting with that long, white bearded, goat bleeper and then every Death Eater.
  
  Sirius and Remus know who they are. Its a game now, survival of the fittest and we all know that the pure blooded, high and mighty, better than you ass clowns wouldn't stand a chance against guerilla warfare. A planned attack would have them all cowering in fear.
  
  And, oh yeah, more one on time with Hermione...she is great, isn't she!!!!
  

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) Cateagle 2012-04-03

  Tch, 'twill be interesting to see if Barty, Sr. was portkeyed to St. Mungo's or to Tom's location; I'll wager the later, to his detriment. A good, action-filled chapter and I rather suspect that they are going to enjoy some one on one R&R time after letting the appropriate adults know where they are and asking for some recovery time before the adults come storming in. I have a feeling that Albus will not enjoy the following "discussion" nor will 'most anyone else involved in this "cluster-experience".

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) Vanir 2012-04-03

  Most amusing. This Harry-edition is just an awesome read. It's like he's locked in a High Dudgeon-mode, constantly obeying his immediate response unless he has a really, really good reason not to. Plot subtleties are lost on him as he barges through the clever obstacles in front of him. Animagus? Rhino. Or possibly a Triceratops since he does come across as rather primitive at times. I can just see him raising an eyebow when someone slams their fist to the table. Then reducto the annoying hand apart.
  I'm not far away whenever you update.
  
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• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) GBTtown 2012-04-04

  Abso-tively awesome chapter! But, what happened to the bends? I mean it doesn't just go away!!

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) jchangpa 2012-06-07

  Hi, really good story, I love the way Harry destroy the Auror, specially the DE ones. When can we see a new chapter, hopefully soon. Congratulation on the expand of the the family.
  
  Also when can we read the final demises of one Ronald Wesley and Draco Malfoy.

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) Fitsofrage 2012-07-30

  Freaking awesome! I love the plot you're running with. I always did appreciate a slightly off Harry/Hermione XD Is there more forthcoming?

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  (#) Hytekrednek 2013-06-18

  Just wanted to let you know love the story. Are you going to finish it?

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  (#) Pointer 2013-08-24

  If you should get back to writing, please work on this one. Great story.
  Funny as anything.

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) Trebores1 2014-01-31

  I like the story. Hope you continue it soon.

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