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Arctic Flower
(#) Haze 2012-04-06
So I pretty much stalk everything you post on this website, and don't leave you reviews nearly often enough, so I'll leave you this one and try to improve in the future. (:
That conversation between Bernadette and Gerard was expertly handled. You gave us a lot of information, but the dialogue was still incredibly natural and believable. It's rare to find a writer who can fill a conversation with nothing but backstory and still make it sound like a conversation. I tip my hat to you.
Especially liked the insight into Gerard's character. Poor Mikey. I wonder if Frank knew him, or if Mikey was before his time?
I shall continue to stalk your writing, but I'll try to be more vocal about it. (:
- HazeArctic Flower
(#) killjoy_blackrose 2012-04-07
i agree with the author above. there isn't anything i could add.
but it suck to have no ratijg points right now. if i had any i'd rate this.
xkArctic Flower
(#) PartyPooperX 2012-04-15
That was awesome! So, so good. You're writing is just incredible. And that last bit? Wow.
You're amazing at dialogue; that bit with Bernadette and Gerard was really good. I wanna know about this Mikey character of yours! Hmm. Yes. I shall pend for the next chapter!Arctic Flower
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-05-28
The conversation between Gerard and Bernadette was just fantastic. You are so good at dialogue. So Gerard's picked Frank up due to failing his brother? Sad times, man. I don't like it when Mikey gets hurt.
SF
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