(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-04-17This was so cute! The parallelism between Gerard and Frank's paragraphs made was awesome. I loved how the idea behind it, that you can be a complete and utter wreck and that one person can save you from yourself. Now if only that really happened. Hope you post more soon!
Author's responseThanks! I'm glad the parallelism came across, I was worried that it didn't really work.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D
(#) AlteredStateOfMind 2012-04-20omgomgomg, so adorable!
the idea was great, and i love how everything flowed perfectly.
the way gerard needed someone and frank needed someone to need him was just asdhjkleus ~
awesome job :)
Author's responseThank you very much!
I'm relieved that you think it flowed alright.
Thanks for taking the time to review! :D
(#) snake56tongue 2012-04-21Wow... this is...
It confused me a wee bit, at first, how you switched between Frank and Gerard, but I think you pulled it off excellently.
It's so beautiful, and poetic, and you can really see how they are each other's only hope.
I love how they each were the same, but different at the same time, y'know? Like Frank had the razor and Gerard had the alcohol, and even though they had problems, they were different.
Wonderfully done doll :)
Author's responseSorry that it confused you, it really wasn't the clearest thing in the world but I'm relieved you think I pulled it off alright. :)
I was aiming for them to come across as the same, both in need of hope, so it's good to hear that came across.
Thank you very much! :D
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