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Chapter Nineteen
33 reviews'Two perfect tears seep out from under his closed eyes, trickling past his spiky lashes and down his deathly white cheeks....'
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Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) tasha_SilentRemedy 2012-04-19
DONT DELETE!! i love this story so much, that chapter was perfect !! xxAuthor's response
Thank you so much! :'DTrying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) LaraTheUnicornz 2012-04-19
OH MY GOSH this is great! Progress, now they can be all like falalalalalalala and get married:DAuthor's response
Yay, thank you!Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) IBlameTheLemon 2012-04-19
Hun, don't feel icky bout this chapter! Its sooo beautiful just like the rest of your writing:) I love how Gee is drawin Frank and how he has started to soften up to him :) its really great! I just love this story!
I'm sorry you feel like shit. I hope you can feel much better soon :) like a unicorn on drugs. That would be a good feeling :) XDDDD
Author's response
Thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing :D
Thanks...me too :LTrying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) LanaKrueger 2012-04-19
Please, don't delete this chapter, it's perfect! Seriously, this is my absolute favourite chapter of this story so far. I love it how you made it seem so real, I honestly felt like I was sitting somewhere in the club, watching Frank, Gerard, Danny and the others :] I'm so sorry to hear that you don't feel well :( . If you need someone to talk to, you can message me anytime ^^Author's response
Aww, thank you so much honey! I'm glad you like it, and that's such a big compliment- I always try and make my stories feel real.
Thanks, that's really sweet of you :) Thank you for being so supportive, it means a lot.Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) MichiamoNicola 2012-04-19
I liked this, it was gooood! Don't be so hard on yourself, your stories are some of the only stories I read on here!Author's response
Thank you, that's really nice to hear :)Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) amos222 2012-04-19
Can I marry you? I swear to God, your stories are just SO utterly perfect, and you are just SO entirely amazing, and everything you do is just SO fucking impressive. This chapter was the sweetest thing. Gerard and Frank had some degree of breakthrough, and more shit was set up to go through the fan at a later time. I like that Ocean is going south, because I just din't particularly love her and I think Frank deserves better BFF's. Thank you do much for updating even though you feel like shit. You are wonderful and you only ever deserve to feel on top of the world.Author's response
Ahh, THANK YOU SO MUCH! Your reviews always make my day :D Thank you, I'm so glad you liked the chapter and thanks for taking the time (again) to leave such a lovely review- it really means a lot :'DTrying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) satellite_moon 2012-04-19
I love how you have taken tour time with this story. I love the way you describe the city.. polluted rain will and such and how these descriptions also apply to how the characters feel. Amazing!Author's response
Thanks :) I'm glad you like it and thanks for taking the time to review :DTrying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) aweirdtree 2012-04-20
oh god no, don't delete this, please! because i loved it. thank you! and i totally loved the description "a slim, black figure of broken midnight". AAAAAAAAAAAA, i'm fangirling here now because fuck, who's able to write like that?? thank you, girl!Author's response
Yay, I'm glad you liked it :D Ahh, I did enjoy writing that bit xD Awww, you're so sweet...thank you for taking the time to review!Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) GeorgiaMCRlover 2012-04-20
Your writing is amazing. The way you describe the characters are amazing. The way you make the characters seem so realistic is amazing. You are amazing!
This is my favourite story on here and I really really really cannot wait for an update!Author's response
YOU are amazing for reviewing! Thank you so much, honey :'D That means a hell of a lot to hear. Thank you.Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) gerardways_coffee 2012-04-20
OMG this chapter was amazing, no joke. I'm blown away by your writing, it's so good, and the plots are so original! I sometimes wonder how you do it. Anyways, sad to hear things maybe aren't the best atm:( but I hope this review helps, can't wait for the next update,
Sian xo
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