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Under City Lights
(#) ReddyDevil 2012-04-23
OH BRENDON, NO YOU DI'NT!!!!!!! bitchy face (Just so you know, I've been told my bitchy face rivals that of Spencer Smith's)
SERIOUS anger towards that idiot. I'm surprised Ryan didn't go all ninja on his ass and kick his butt. I would've. And I can't imagine the heartache Juliet's gonna have when she finds out she was drugged. -.- Not cool, Brendon. Seriously, is there gonna be any return from this?
(Because they DO get together in the end, I'm guessing, I just had this thought... "Daddy, how did you meet Mummy?" "Well, kids, you see, there's a funny story about that... First date we ever went on, I drugged her!") I know that seems really horrible, but it sounded funny in my head. XD
Random shout out to Jon for being so awesome and... Awesome. Yeah, there really is no other word for him. And I'm interested to see how he and Brendon the asshole know each other.
Anyway, you succeeded with trying to get Juliet to act differently. Yay for you! thumbs up I can't wait till the next chapter! Dun dun duuuunnnnn....
(Oh, and thank you so much for reading and reviewing Phantoms - seriously, you have no idea what reading that did to me!)
P.S. ... I just noticed... I didn't included any Fightstar references... :( Maybe someone's ringtone can be one of their songs! Yes! And I'm still waiting for the random British exchange students! XDAuthor's response
That's quite a feat!
Eh, it ALMOST happened but unfortunately... Ryan is quite tame in this story. I didn't write him as awesomely as I could've. =/
Hahaha. oh god, I do know that is terrible and I never mean to make light of a situation where drugging someone is involved but that made me laugh so freaking hard, for a long period of time. You're awesome.
YES! I am a HUGE Jon fan. I had a Jon fanfic written that I was part way through but no one read it or I would've continued. =/ Kind of sad. but yes, go Jon!
Oh, there will definitely be more on that. It goes in and out... then the chapter after this next one goes in to detail.
I'm glad. :D I was iffy on whether I succeeded so thanks.
(I really, really did enjoy it! Sorry it took so long for me to get to it!)
YES! Ringtone time! It's such a good idea but I DON'T want to lose my own focus on them haha.
... Charlie. Me= In love.Under City Lights
(#) ReddyDevil 2012-04-23
Holy shit...
Sorry, didn't realise it was that LONG! 0.0Author's response
Haha, the longer the better. :DUnder City Lights
(#) GAClive 2012-04-23
Dickfaced asshole. shakes fist at Brendon He gives gorgeous smile in return DAMNIT WHY IS HE SO HOT?!
This might actually be the most I've cussed in a review for one of your stories. 0.o
I need to go put some money in the swear jar... =P
And Jon is an absolute sweetheart for not taking advantage of her.Author's response
OMFG, yay cursing! I love the reaction lol. And it is. I don't see you cursing often.
I do it... too much.
I'm pretty sure him being so freaking hot is against the law of attraction honestly. It offsets the balance, making good looking people ugly and ugly people... freaks of nature. The bar has risen way too high.
Haha, do you actually have a swear jar?
Definitely. Much love towards Jon.Under City Lights
(#) Tierney6661 2012-04-23
So, have I ever reviewed and told you how much I adore this story? I don't think I have, so.... A M A Z I N G. I'm actually addicted, I think. I really look forward to updates and I want one now!!! Or at least soon :D
So far, Team Jon. All. The. Way. Juliet needs to give Brendon a HUGE wake up call, rich little biatch. Ryan is so.. gullible, poor thing just wants Juliet to be happy :( I hope some shit goes down in the next chapter, I reeeeally do. So, update soon? Pretty please?Author's response
You haven't but thank you so much! I appreciate the review. :D
I'll try to update asap! Maybe even tonight. :D I'm working on it!
Jon is quite amazing. I'm glad he made an impression so far.
Of course. :D Hope to hear what you think of the next chapter!Under City Lights
(#) GAClive 2012-04-24
My swear jar doubles as my coffee fun, it's a win win. =P Well I TRY to keep thing professional on this site, and I'm religious so just wasn't raised to cuss a lot... but I do anyway. Usually I cuss for humor's sake or when something goes horribly wrong in a sudden manner and then I put sailors to shame with my cussing. Hands down though, my favorite cuss word is "shit" it's so universal and fits any situation and the way the air hisses out at first and then ends in that sudden hard consonant. So satisfying!
Seriously, he is just too good looking. He could sell his sperm for so freaking much.
and now I just wrote the creepiest thing I ever have in an interview.Author's response
Ooh, that IS a win-win. I like the idea.
Ah, what religion?
I was raised by my catholic grandparents. It's so funny when my grandma curses now.
They aren't super strict or anything and their religion never struck with me but before I moved in with them I lived with my step-dad who was in and out of prison. I'm pretty sure his language stuck with me lol. I can't seem to break the habit. If I have kids I'll probably have a swear jar and use the money for something for them, something along those lines.
Haha mine is 'fuck' it's also the one I use WAY too much.
I love the description there, this is honestly something you've thought about lol.
I promise not to quote you, hard as that might be. :P
Now for my creepy quote:
I'd buy it.Under City Lights
(#) GAClive 2012-04-24
Protestant Christian, still am but... Jesus is patient. =P My mom actually cusses like a pirate ever since I was 16 which is really hilarious because she is old fashioned and religious... so she gets old fashioned with her cussing.
Haha oh yes. My big sis and I once had this indepth conversation why it was the best cuss word. Versatile and just oh so satisfying to say.
Haha I just realized I wrote "interview" instead of review. Oops. Hehe thank yooou. I'm sure it'd be ok if you do as long as no one finds out my true identity.
Hehe we could each buy some and then be like aunties or something! =D My kid would probably be some overly hyper vampire though. I have the same coloring as Bden and I was a bit of a twisted and strange child.Author's response
That's true. I still have so much to figure out in life, mostly about myself, before I'm ready to commit to any beliefs. I'm just not there yet. I think the only times I've gone to church were when I went with my friend, her dad is a Pastor, or with my boyfriends dad.
Do you go to church regularly?
Haha, that would be so odd to hear! But I know how funny it can be because my grandma is the same. :D She's adorable when she does it actually... lol.
I'm really, really wondering if this is a common occurrence because I had a similar conversation with a few of my friends back in HS lol
I figured it out. :P I won't go all detective then!
O.o That would completely work and I'm sure my kid would be extremely odd as well. I'm SUPER pale. It's ridiculous. My skin like deflects sun, I swear.
I don't bite people though. :PUnder City Lights
(#) GAClive 2012-04-24
Yeah, that's really the way to go, gotta know yourself first before you make a potentially life-changing decision. One of my friend's the other day told me "I think I'm gonna be buddhist!" And I was like "You do know you have to detach yourself from worldly pleasures to do that, right?" "WHAT?! FUCK NO!" If you're gonna believe in something, know what it is and really truly consider it. I get so annoyed with people who are only nominally religious and treat their belief system like a football team you root for during the sports season.
I do. I grew up in a church and was lucky enough to have a circle of girlfriends in it. And I also like my church, it satisfies my intellectual needs and they have become my family. And they're all uber nerdy (especially the pastor). =P
My mom and her grandma both say "Shit, fart, damn". It's adorable.
It might be! I know I've probably had similar conversations with others.
Wait... figured what out? is suddenly paranoid
I'm really pale too. I cause glare at the beach. Which is really sad because I'm a So Cal girl who has never had a tan. And I'm pretty sure I bit people when I was little... sounds like something I'd do.Author's response
Eh, I have friends who seem to think being Buddhist = being fat. X.x
I agree with you, a lot of people are like that... about a lot of different things, it's always irritating.
That's awesome! Unfortunately the church my friend's Dad is a pastor at... is like everyone over 60 (except me and her) and the first service I went to consisted of this little old ladies cell phone ringing through out the entire service. and her repeatedly answering it, then loudly holding a conversation.
I hear she does that every service.
I almost laughed, because it was just so weird. But then I felt bad for my friend's Dad because he just tried to talk over it.
Haha, that's great! I love when older people curse. It's just... magical.
I figured out you meant review, not interview. Lol, have no worry... I'm not nearly detective enough to figure out anything worth knowing.
I'm from North Cali, haha. I grew up in Redding. Ever been there? Despite hitting up Shasta Lake constantly... the sun never made an impression.
haha, do you still bite?
And re-reading this... and every other review I put ANYWHERE brings me to the conclusion that I overuse 'Haha'
O.o
Sad.
But I really do laugh a lot. And if I'm not actually laughing, then I'm laughing on the inside.
That counts, right?Under City Lights
(#) GAClive 2012-04-25
I still don't know why chinese buddha statues are fat. o.0 The indian statues always depict him as slim.
Oooooh those darling old ladies. And their cell phones....
The farthest north I've been is San Fran but yeah it is a bit cloudier than socal.
Ummm no thankfully. =P
We all have our trademark phrases thingies. And so if you do laugh a lot, it fits!Author's response
Eh, it's always different everywhere. I don't know where certain things come from either. I'm too lazy to research everything that slightly catches my attention.
And loud ringing, and not hearing, then loud conversations...
I've got some family there too. I've pretty much got family sprinkled all through out California, some in Oregon and then the rest in Germany.
Well, I swear... I feel evil if I don't add 'haha' or 'lol' I'll re-read it and be like... I sound horribly unamused and just... not like a happy person.Under City Lights
(#) GAClive 2012-04-25
I actually still have a note to look up why 1001 Arabian nights had a female hero in the story when Arabia was well into the first stages of gender oppression and why it praised educated women when at the time women weren't encouraged to be educated for quite a while. My history professor and I were both wondering that LAST semester... I've just been too lazy.
You think they'd know to turn their cellphone off during something or at least leave to talk.
Hehe, I know what you mean. "Hmm this needs a smiley face or else they won't know I'm joking"Author's response
Definitely worth looking in to! Hmm. Now, I'm curious. I'm going to have to look up ALL OF THAT.
What are you majoring in? I don't think I've asked you that.
Exactly! I hate to be the serious reviewer.
I hate cats. :P
I hate cats.
See, the first time is okay because there is a tongue!
lol that probably didn't prove my point at all but it was all I could think of on the spot.Under City Lights
(#) GAClive 2012-04-26
English but hopefully when I transfer it will be creative writing and possibly a minor in music.
No, the example was spot on. LOL, I feel tempted to write reviews now without ANY smileys and then I could be like the cool person with the dry sense of humor or something... kidding, I could never pull that off without getting into fights with people.Author's response
Haha, don't worry... as long as you don't stick your face too close to the screen... they can't get you. :P
I'm sure something on this site could be easily misread and instantly turn in to a fight of some sort. Especially if we switch to the MCR category, people seem to love non-writing related drama over there. X.x
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