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Translations of Blood
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-05-07
"What's the point in life if you don't have a dick?!" Have you seen that film? You should see it.
Uhh...Favourite chapter so far!Absolutely beautifully written, especially Frank's emotions...as I'm sure I've said before. I like how you describe his new feelings about rebellion and punk and stuff. The gig bit was awesome as well, reminded me of one me and my friends
went to recently called Hit the Deck. Happy memories...
Well done for getting this out and making it so good, I know you're under a lot of pressure. But don't worry, bad times never last long and you're still living up to your usual fantastic standard! :)
SFAuthor's response
Nooo I haven't...what film is it?
Yay! I'm so glad you liked it :) I fucking love the feel of gigs, so I was really trying to re-create that...thanks so much for taking the time to leave such a nice review, it really means a lot- especially right now :)Translations of Blood
(#) amos222 2012-05-07
Wow. There's just so many good things that I want to say, I just can't even verbalize them. I think te first part that caught my attention was "anything as safe as a nightmare". That just rings true really deeply inside of me, and I think lots of other readers as well. The thought of nightmares, generally the scariest thoughts and representations of the worst fears and guilt that we feel as individuals, being safe… wow. There's just so much meaning in that, and the implications are through the roof. Just… intensity. And the way that you described the punk club was so descriptive without unnecessary words. I wanted to be Frank. I felt like I was him, and it was crazy. (I'm worried about him now being drunk. Nothing good will come of that.) and the parts with Gerard!! What can I even say to those… nothing that isn't obvious. He is intense, and the parts about him are intense, and I loved every syllable of his parts. I think it was in his part that you said something about shadows getting bigger when you din't look at them, and for me that was scarier than all of the other parts, I mean, I am laying on my side in bed in a dark room and I felt like murderer-Gee was about to come out and kill me dead (although I wouldn't be opposed to him doing anything to me). Thank you so much for the update, I think this might have been the best chapter as of yet. And one last thing, pleaseprettyplease don't let Lindsay start dating Frank. I like her as a real person and as a character, but her presence only ever adds frustration to fanfiction.Author's response
Oh my god, thank you so much, honey! Your review actually made my day :'D I'm so glad you get all the descriptive metaphors and stuff- I was kind worried people wouldn't. I'm sorry I scared you, though! Seriously, ahh...just thank you so much! I'm smiling like a crazy person right now :'D
Thank you (once again) for taking the time to leave such a wonderful and detailed review- they make my day!
CosmicZombie xo
P.S. Don't worry about Lindesy...she's not gunna start dating Frank :)Translations of Blood
(#) Ben_Is_Alive_Again 2012-05-08
Sweet Jesus and everything that scares the hell out of me...
If I could be half as good as you are, I'd be a freaking legend. Your description still takes my breath away. I mean, it's like a movie playing in my head, but better. Way better. There isn't a word in my vocabulary that can describe just how epic/awesome/incredible you are.
- BenAuthor's response
Eeep, thank you so much! I've just come back from school early feeling shit, and then I read this and I'm smiling like anything. Thank you so much, seriously :'D That's such a big compliment! I'm glad you like it :)Translations of Blood
(#) aweirdtree 2012-05-08
mwaaah, god D: it was... fucking great. it's getting scary! agh! i love it. prettypretty please, update soon!Author's response
Yay, I'm so glad you like it, and thanks so much for taking the time to review :D :D I shall update soooon! xDTranslations of Blood
(#) SimplexMinded 2012-05-11
this is pure happiness for my reading. it is phenominal! though i do wish Gerard would show soon.....
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