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Hold Out
(#) penguinofdoom19 2007-05-20
This is really good! I absolutely love how you ended it with the same line you started it with. It was funny, sweet, and sad; kudos to you!Hold Out
(#) penguinofdoom19 2007-05-20
This is really good! I absolutely love how you ended it with the same line you started it with. It was funny, sweet, and sad; kudos to you!Hold Out
(#) FFTV 2009-05-23
One thing I loved about this was the fact that it began and ended on the same page. I have a soft spot for stories that pick up on one line and fade out on the same. It was a very good piece. My only comment is that things are so close together. Is it possible for it to be double spaced? Makes things much easier to read.
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