(#) foreverfalling 2012-05-12Within the first chapter there will too many mistakes to make this read-able. I like the idea hence coming to read the story but again, mistakes make it hard to read and get in to.
'Everyone's' 'here' 'Sixx' 'to not too' - There is a few.
Again, I do like the story line though.
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