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• Life's the Game (And I'm a Champion Player)

  (#) ThanksChemVenom 2012-05-18

  I love this, especially the "This is a song,
  For the kids
  Who don’t
  Belong. " :D

  Author's response

  Thank you very much! :D

• Life's the Game (And I'm a Champion Player)

  (#) CosmicZombie 2012-05-19

  That was so good! Really, really liked it; especially the chorus and the middle bit- it flowed just perfectly for a song and I had goosebumps by the end! xD This bit had to be my favourite; 'This is a cry,
  For the kids
  Who want
  To fly.' That bit just really spoke to me :'D Keep up this amazing work- your stories/poems/songs are always a joy to read :)
  
  CosmicZombie xo

  Author's response

  Thank you very, very much! I wasn't too sure if the middle bit worked with the rest of it, so it's really reassuring to know you think it flowed alright.
  
  Thanks again! :D

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