Categories > Celebrities > Panic! At The Disco > Under City Lights
11- Where Is My Prince?
6 reviews“Fine but when you fall in love and need a freakin’ shoe to figure out who the love of your life is… I’m not helping round up the girls in your life.”
1Original
Reviews
Under City Lights
(#) ReddyDevil 2012-05-25
Why do I really not want Juliet to fall for Brendon? I mean, she only 'likes' him, and it's good that he's being nice... But for some reason I just don't want them together at the moment. And it's not because I want to see her get with Jon or Ryan... I think it might be because Brendon was such an asshole earlier. Eh. Oh well. That's just me.
BLOODY HELL, SOMEONE HURRY UP AND TELL HER THAT SHE WAS DRUGGED! I know the shit will hit the fan, but I'm just so eager for her to find out. If they won't do it, I will! Jumps into story Oh, hi boys! XD
I really liked that last line that Juliet said about rounding up all the girls when Brendon wants to find Cinderella. And I'm even more excited by the fact that in your note at the end, you said you'd be working on 'What is Love?'!!!!!!! Gah! I MUST know what happens next in that story.
Anyway, as usual, great update. :DAuthor's response
I'm kind of with you actually but lately for some reason I haven't liked stories with Brendon as the main pairing. Are you the type of person that makes a decision upon the first situation characters are thrown in to? Because then it'd make sense.
Hahaha, that'd be priceless.
I am working on it! I've just been soo busy lately. I didn't expect to be so I feel so horrible that it's taken so long.
Thank you : )Under City Lights
(#) ReddyDevil 2012-05-30
No, not really... I just... I dunno. It's weird. :P
That really would! The Panic! boys would be like, "Who are you and why are you stalking us?!" then I'd say, "Now, 'stalking' is a harsh word to use..." XD
That's okay. Hey! Have I mentioned that I've written about 6k more on 'Phantoms'?! Well, I have. The human Brendon and Ryan have met each other. O.o Ooooooh, interesting stuff, eh? XD Still not sure if I'm gonna post it, but my beta has been giving me a lot of positive feedback for the continued parts so maybe, maybe. We'll see.Author's response
Hahahahaha. When it comes to those boys... stalking is a harsh word. O.o
You haven't mentioned that! When shall it be posted? I'm so excited!
Hey, I can't remember. Did I ever send you the bit of the Jon story that I had written? I think I was going to but can't remember if I did. I've been so exhausted lately that I'm confusing what I have planned and what I've actually done lol.
It has to be posted though! You have to post it! Please?Under City Lights
(#) hollie443 2012-06-07
OMG! I just read this whole thing and it's AWESOME! I really hope that you update soon because this is awesome!!!!
Hollie xoxoAuthor's response
Thank you so much! I'll try to update soon!Under City Lights
(#) atomickilljoy 2012-06-08
I love and reviewed your other stories. I'm going to say this again: update!!!!! This is so awesome!! Update! :DAuthor's response
I know, I appreciate all of your feedback!
Thank you so much, once again. :DUnder City Lights
(#) ReddyDevil 2012-06-18
No, you didn't. Please do! When you're not so exhausted maybe, we can't have that! :)
Hah, well, we'll see. I haven't written anything more for a while; I'm currently mentally planning how to continue the next section, and it's just a matter of me actually getting to sit down and type it. Although that should happen a lot more because my exams are finished now, WHOOOO!
And originally, I was planning to finish writing it all and THEN post it, but I've been getting a lot of positive feedback from my beta, as I mentioned, and also my testing audience (my friend who has no idea who the people are in it; she just enjoyed it as a story XD) so I might upload the part I've got soon. Hmmm... I'll think about it. I'm also writing another 'sense' story - a one shot/standalone; this one's focusing on being mute - so that's being written as well. Pff. So much for just focusing on one story at a time! XDAuthor's response
Haha, I'll try to this weekend! I slept my entire first day of work away! I'm so mad but I guess my body really needed it. =/
Same here. I hope you get the time. YAY, exams finished! That's always good! I hope you did well. :D
That's really, really good if people like it without knowing the band in it. That shows just how good it really is. Nooo! Don't wait until it's all finished! That would be torture!
Oooh, that will be interesting!Under City Lights
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-06-21
“I want to watch Cinderella.” Brendon said, pouting.
Now, I want to watch Cinderella, and it's now my favorite Disney princess movie. even though I find every one in it annoying, it's now my favorite!!!Author's response
:) I know! Haha, I'm glad it made such an impact!
Thank you for the review, I always enjoy reading them!
Sign up to review this story.