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Shooting Up On Stars
2 reviews"One criminal guy and his cardinal sin." LYRICS. Feedback hugely appreciated! :)
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Shooting Up On Stars
(#) tortillachip 2012-05-29
This was great!!! I'm not too familiar with Panic! At The Disco and not at all familiar with Andrew W.K., so I can't really make the connection, but I can definitely tell that this was inspired by Cobra Starship. Anyway, I really liked this. Though I thought the style reminded me of Cobra Starship, the lyrics alone were very original. They were also very bold, but in the best way possible. They have really left an imprint in my mind. I can't stress how much I loved this. Great job!!!Author's response
Thanks! Panic! At The Disco is my third favorite band (behind MCR and Fall Out Boy, but even then it's almost tying with FOB). I'm not too familiar with Andrew W.K. either, but I got his album "I Get Wet" the other day and some of the songs on it inspired this. He's kinda like heavy dance music, damn catchy shit that be. It's awesome that you can tell Starship inspired this; I take that as a huge compliment!
I'm very pleased that you liked this and thank you very much! :DShooting Up On Stars
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-06-01
God, that was so good. You'd better end up being in a band when you're older, 'cause that was absolutely BRILLIANT- and I would totally buy all your albums xD Seriously, though, I think that was professional standard- fuck, it was better than a lot of professional songs I've heard. It flowed perfectly, the message was unique and interesting and very relatable, the vocabulary was great, and the rhythm flowed perfectly. Also, the chorus? Gold. Fucking Gold. Really catchy and original, and I can tell it's gunna stick in my mind- after I read it, I found myself going around humming it for the next couple hours! :L
Sorry, this review's turned out kinda long, hasn't it? :L
Anyway, whatever you do KEEP WRITING! You could really go places, honey.
CosmicZombie xoAuthor's response
Thank you very, very much! And I'd love to be in a band; my friend (who plays bass... kinda) and I desperate to get one together. The fact that you of all people think this is good enough to sound somewhat professional really means a lot to me! I wasn't too sure about the chorus, so it's very nice to hear that you thought it was alright.
Don't apologize; long reviews make me smile! :D
I most definitely will!
Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :D :) :D
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