(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-06-07I like what you did here. The fact that you've given us a list of what they'll have to go through will help us get into the story more. Nice one, can't wait for an update! xo
Author's responseThank you. I was going to finish and make it one longish chapter, but I'm kind of struggling with how I'm putting together what will be the next chapter. Thanks again :D
(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-06-07Well. YOu have my attention, a somewhat rare thing as of late, and I hope this story will hold it. It seems promising, so please continue writing it.
Author's responseThank you! I'm not quitting on this one. Updates may be kind of short due to the fact that I have the attention span of about 15 minutes but I'll try and update as frequently as I can. :)
(#) BleedingValentine 2012-06-07As mychemicalbithbot said, you DO have my attention. I'm looking forward to the story O.O
Author's responsewoop woop!
jumps and claps
Thank you, it was horrible to write this, and the rules are from an actual camp though, I did not make those up.
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-06-20I'm agreeing with the above, unable to speak for the first two days and unable to discuss what they are going through at camp= sounds like some abuse is going to be going down.
You've got my attention with this introduction. I'm excited to read on!
Author's responseWoo! Glad you like it, thanks c:
(#) ArgyleSockMonkey 2012-06-23You know this is a legit thing, right? I totally just watched a documentary on netflix about this today! It's called "This Is What Love In Action Looks Like". Btw, I totally watched it cuz I'd been following this story:)
Author's responseYea, I had originally gotten the idea myself, but I didn't know anything about operation or their "mission, so I looked them up, trying to make this as realistic as possible.
That's really cool! c:
(#) upinflames 2012-08-29Dude. DUDE. This is ... well not beautiful since it's such a fucking ugly topic, but it's beautiful since you wrote it from this side of the story. UNF. what the fuck else happened while I was out of Ficwad??? This is GENIUS. like, seriously. Cereally. Cereal. Serial. Serial killer.
[I don't know what the bitch happened back there, but I hope you keep this story in your mind as I catch up. :3 COS YOUR STORY LOOKS PURDY DAMN GOOD FROM HERE. Anyways. ~Love~]
- I find it suspicous that they can't tell others what's going on or keep a journal. And THE LOVE IN ACTION YOUTH CAMP THING ISNT IN SERVICE ANYMORE THANK GOD. And did you know that two male derectors of an adult program like this fell in love? I find that awesome.
Author's responseI did know that it didn't exist anymore, but I was not aware of the last part. Omg, another frerard xD
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