- Love. Thanks for writing and posting this!! I think this might be one of my favorite poem/songs of yours so far. I feel like I can imagine the way a singer would emphasize certain parts of it in different ways and the very core feelings that an audience member would experience. Amazing.
(#) AdnarimSmada 2012-08-19I'll be straight up with you here, you are an excellent writer (I was reading ToB earlier and it's like a morbid fairy tale...) but I think you are just outstanding as poet.
You could make it as a songwriter, believe me.
"Dress of Bones" was just mind blowing and this is right up there with it.
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