(#) BleedingValentine 2012-06-10O.O.... You're right, it is a bit short :P But it's okay! I'm practically jumping up and down I want to know what's going to happen O.O
Author's responseSorry about the length, I'll fix it asap. Thanks though, I'm glad you liked it!
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-06-11Yay! You updated!!! I'm really liking this so far, and I actually think the length was suitable for this chapter... Nice work, can't wait for another update! xo
Author's responseThanks so much! I'm already halfway done with the next chapter. :)
- Poor Frank. With grandparents like that who needs enemies?
Gee seems like a badass. They're going to have their hands full trying to break him.
Author's responseYep. I really just made him do what I would in that situation.
No music? Ha.
keels over and dies
(#) upinflames 2012-08-29Ok, so super short. But I'm fine with cos I know how writing a story feels. SOMETIMES IT'S HARD AS SHIT. But one thing that bugged me, even though I'm sure no one else cares but: alright or all right.
Ugh I feel like a rude douchey bitch. Ignore me. I suck. Like, Popsicles. Lollipops. Or like fruit bars. Maybe a spoonfull of nutella. Or like the whole jar. Could be ice cream cones. Hm. There's lots of things I suck ...
[Gah, I'm terrible at staying on subject. Gerard's badassness and Frank's not badassness puzzles me. And kinda intrigues me at the same time, like, in my mind, Frank this stoner bamf while Gerard is the nerdy guy in his basement. Probably doesn't apply here. Oh, and I don't care what anyone says, I'm so rooting that if Frerard was factually actually real, Frank would totally top. Anyways. ~Love~ ]
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