(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-06-18Wow, I totally dig this.
It's dark, and completely messed up but... dare I say, wonderful.
Will there be more?
I was hoping Gerard wouldn't die but it seems he has, or that's what the ending meant I suppose.
I'm still a dreamer though.
Author's responseThank you so much!
The ending is for you to decide- sadly I shall not be writing any more for this. I had considered it after getting overly attached to the characters but I think it needs to stay as a stand alone.
- It is sad I feel bit like crying? Poor Frank - his Dad is a complete manipulative bastard. And poor Gerard for being eaten. I think they should of left his mother to die. Not in a bad way, but sort of like where she's better off to be dead, rather than some shadow of who she was, y'know?
Anyways, this was awesome, and I really didn't expect the ending - from the way you described Gerard and his too bright eyes, I thought it was going to be the other way round.
Nice work :3
Author's responseSee that's what I wanted you guys to think, like originally Frank was going to die but then I was kind of like no.
Thank you so much! C:
- Dude, if it was possible for me to marry a story, trust me, it would be this one. It was /amazing/. So dark and twisted, but awesome at the same time. It made me want to cry and, like, move to a Scottish island and become a recluse at the same time. You kept leading me on, dropping hints and making me wonder what was coming and what did, I totally didn't expect. You, my friend, are awesome and very talented.
Author's responseThank you so so much! This review made me grin
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
(#) monstrice901 2012-06-19Wow, this was totally amazing. I loved the idea and you wrote it really well. I did guess the ending but you wrote it good enough to not be obvious. If not for the title, I probably wouldn't have figured out what was going until you said. It was really, really great - especially for a one shot.
And just outta interest was the title to part two from LostAlone. If so - I love that song! If not - listen to it!
Author's responseThank you so much! This review means a lot cause I really worked my butt of on this fic
Yes it is! I wrote this partly for Cosmic Zombies music and words challenge and the song fitted well so
(#) MCRfreak15 2012-06-19wow.
i thought Gerard was the cannibal the whole way through xD
this was actually really ace. and very psycological...
you should write more stuff like this :) x
Author's responseThank you!
I was trying to kind of trick you guys a little so I'm glad that worked for you!
I will do -I had a lot of fun writing
(#) LanaKrueger 2012-06-20Whoa I read it last night and I had a nightmare in which I was a cannibal :D I've watched over 150 horror movies, but nothing scares me like horror stories/novels and this is one of the best horror fanfictions I've ever read! You definitely have a talent for horror :]
Author's responseHehehehehe I'm not too sorry but I'll say I am anyway
Horror films don't scare me, but books do- i think it's easier to get drawn into them
Thank you so so so very much!
(#) midnight_star22 2012-06-20Whoa...I did NOT see that coming..I was expecting Gerard to be the cannibal. Especially when he spoke of Lindsey being killed and the dead body in the tracks.
Wonderful though! Way to surprise us all! It was wonderfully dark and twisted. :)
Author's responseThe train thing has happened to me the past two times I went to London- true story
Thank you so much! C:
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