(#) PartyPooperX 2012-06-21OHMYGOD I DID NOT SEE THIS COMING.
Ahhhh that's so upsetting, I thought this would just be a cute little fluff about no direction in life, meeting a guy falling in love yadayadayada (like mine!) but then HOLD UP H'S A CANNIBAL.
Jesus, this was amaze. I love how you described gerard's imperfections - so skilled how your descriptions and tiny niggling things made us think that HE wasn't write, but its really Frank. Phenominally written, an amazingly dark twist and....aahhh words cannot describe.
Author's responseThank you so much! asahuidhiil
I really like red-herrings at the moment
Thank you so much this review is like what my dreams are inspired by nowwhatsthiswithlookinglikeyouveupdated19thennotahduhldfreyoutryingtokillme?
(#) Coffeeaddict98 2012-06-24Oh my God this is amazing. I thought it was Gerard and then it turned out to be Frank's mam. So well written and dark and twisted and awesome and amazing and unpredictable and I'm running out of adjectives. This was a great read adds to favourites x !-!
Author's responseThank you so much! efgrlei;ea
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-06-28Wooooah. That was...Wow. Dark and twisted and beautifully written. This has to be one of the best horror-fics I've ever read. The way you built the tension and used language and the way the plot unfolded was simply brilliant. Amazing stuff, dude. Thank you so much for writing it! Your writing skills just seem to get better and better...I'd love to read more work of yours in this style. Once more; awesome. Just...gah. I had chills all down my spine from reading it. Dark in such a messed-up way, but such a good story. I greatly enjoyed reading it, although I have to admit, I did keep glancing over my shoulder! :L
Author's responsewahuefhurirgrrio oh, you thank you so much! This review made me smile so much like so much it really means a lot coming from you like seriously I was so worried about this fiction because horror is kind of a bitch to write so I'm super glad you liked it!
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-09-04WOW. Just...wow. I can't actually think of words to describe this here, except maybe "masterpiece". (Kinda like that word, it's like "master" and "piece". Go crazy!) But yeah. The writing was phenomenal, everything about it from the slow build up at the beggining to that mad twist at the end...who saw that coming? Not me! But I'm super glad it did because I kind of thought Gerard was the cannibal and I didn't really want him to be the cannibal...
But seriously here. Just incredible work. Wow. WOW.
Author's responseYou are too nice to me! Gahh waking up to this reivew almost mad me forget about the terrors of school.
I'ma go watch scott pilgrin now but jesus christ thank you so much!
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