Categories > Original > Poetry
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-06-28Eep. I have shivers! That was really good- poetry is such a personal thing, but I really felt this struck a chord with me. Your use of language and rhythm was great, and I especially loved this line: 'With my face carved from tears of the broken'. I wish I'd come up with that, it's brilliant!
A great little thought-provoking read. Thank you very much for posting.
Author's responseThank you! It means a lot, especially coming from you.
(#) Razortotherosary 2012-07-02This really was beautiful, and its so personal and deep. I seriously (spelling? Fuckit) love this.
Author's responseThank you very much, your review means a lot, I was quite nervous about posting this x (and yeah you spelt it right xD I have a problem with spelling series for some reason, I write and then I'm like wtf? And I have to correct it :D)
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