Franks point of veiw... dealing with a long lasting eating disorder, carless and abusive parents can gerard save the once bright eyed frank iero? FERARD.... maybe
This could be a good story, I'd like to see where it goes next. Some tips would be at least re-read over your writing, use capitalization and punctuation, and spellcheck. But it isn't that bad.
I agree with Valentinerevenge, this could be a really cool story and i cant wait to see what happens(:
This will be awesome broski! Please continue...
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