(#) Coffeeaddict98 2012-06-27Just when you think that it can't get any better...Lucy that was absolutely amazing. The way you create atmosphere is awe-inspiring, and such a long and well written update-well worth the wait. I honestly can't articulate how incredible this is, I loved the frerard bit at the end there. You write with such skill! Brilliant just brilliant.
Author's responseAwww, thank you SO much :'D I'm smiling so much now! Thank you for taking the time to leave such a lovely review, it means a whole lot to me :')
(#) JessicaAlexandra 2012-06-27Hey there. First off how are you feeling? Better I hope. Even though I don't know you personally I worry because I feel like through your writing I get closer and closer to you. So I hope things are looking up.
And this chapter. Oh my gosh. It literally had me in tears. I was like oh this chapters so short, but it made up for itself. Gerard is so raw in this chapter. I was worried that he wasn't going to change but WOW! He seemed real for the first time I think ever. I wanted to yell at Frank for not letting him in but it's understandable. Gerard has been a jerk. This whole chapter was sooooo wonderful that I kind of wish it was longer. I really want him to try harder with Frank because I think he has a shot. Why can't he just confess his undying love and get it over with? Anyway this chapter was wonderful as always and I can't wait for the next update.
Author's responseI am feeling a little better, thank you for asking :)
Eeee, I'm so glad you liked the chapter- I was super worried about posting it. And yeah, the relationships in this story will just take time (as you've probably already guessed xD), but hopefully it'll all be worth it in the end. Thank you SO much for reviewing, it means a lot :'D
(#) ChampionTeaDrinker 2012-06-27It's surprising how long it takes to read one chapter when you spend most of it flailing...
Seriously, that was amazing. It made me squeal, and bounce up and down, and cry a little, and was generally just phenomenal and stuff. Keep at it, because your updates are easily the highlight of my week ^.^
I really hope you feel better soon, I'll be thinking of you :)
Author's responseMeeep, thank you! :'D That's so sweet, thank you very much for taking the time to review :D :D
(#) teenagerfrommars 2012-06-27Ok... WHOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.
I've been following this story for a while now after reading "Be My Detonator" by chance, and I checked the other day to see if you'd updated only to see your note. So firstly, I sincerely hope that you're feeling better about yourself, because honestly you are SO INCREDIBLY DAMN TALENTED, it's insane that you were ever able to question your ability in the first place!!!!! Seriously, I've read some of your other work and you're without a doubt one of- if not THE- most talented writers here I've come across yet! So sorry, fan girl moment over- it's been building for a while now! X_X - but just know that you are extremely gifted with vast WAREHOUSE loads of potential, and if you ever feel yourself in such a place again, just remember, as I speak the truth! salutes Anyways, this chapter was without a doubt worth the wait and brilliant in the utmost, so thank you! :cD I can't wait to read the rest, but take your time with it! Best wishes! :cD
(#) KeroseneResistance 2012-06-27There aren't enough compliments to do this story justice. Its raw and it feels so real and i can see every scene perfectly in my head. Your descriptions are so thought provoking its just so agonisingly beautiful. This chapter was well worth the wait, it was wild and tender at the same time, it was so emotionally charged I found myself crying at the end. Another awe-inspiring piece, thank you for writing it :) x
(#) MCRkilljoy 2012-06-27Wow. I was physically shaking reading this. It was so intense! I'm actually upset that I was too late to rate it.. It was just so.... Wow. There really isn't any words to describe how good it is. I mean, the way you demonstrated the entire chapter was top class. You really don't know how good you are! It was amazing!!
(#) BleedingValentine 2012-06-27Whhhaaaaa! I was thinking at the beginning 'oh hurry up already' (not to say you're not a good writer) but I'm so glad something happened between Gee and Frankie! Eeeee! OMG This was cute! You are seriously amazing.
I didn't mean it to sound that rude. Sorry :P
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-06-27Oh my god. I want to cry... That was so emotional! Gerard cares about Frank! I literally can't explain how I feel after reading that, because I don't even know. What I do know is that you are a fantastic writer and that chapter was well worth the wait, my dear.
Update as soon as you can, we don't want you feeling bad.
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