(#) Alexandra_Day 2012-07-16Damn you are totally distracting me from my physics homework! But god dammit it was fucking worth it! I love this story! Gaa FRANKIE!
Author's responselol sorry, if it makes you feel any better I should be doing Revision for my HSC trials, but yet I’m here responding to your comment lol :) thank you and im so happy you love the story:)
i should go and do some revision for my trials now lol.
(#) imakilljoywannabe 2012-07-31I think it might be interesting to add Gerard somewhere to kind of show how he perceives the whole thing, but if you want to keep it in Frank's it might add more suspense!
Author's responseI’ve been thinking the same thing, about maybe doing Gerard’s Prospective but I don't know.
I feel I might stuff it up if I start writing two personalities. But then if I did change prospective then things might be clearer to understand the situation. But then again suspense keeps the reader on their toes and hungry for more, plus they can identify themselves the main character (Frank) because of the uncertainty of the other person :)
dose that make sense, or am I just talking shit?
Lol oh well anyway…
Keep commenting on my chapters and let me know if I need to start doing Gerard’s Prospective if it’s not making sense or something like that. Thanks for commenting.
(#) MidnightBlues 2012-10-30I LOVE IT!!!!! I know I am a bit late with this review, but my friend recommended it to me a few weeks ago but I was reading a fanfiction by Bulletproof Ninja (brilliant auther) so I needed to finish that first. There is one thing though, can I just point out that you spelt Coma wrong, you spelt it Comer. Sorry.
Author's responseYay i'm glad you like it. Yes you can point that out XD now i can go fix it, thank you for letting me know and thank you for commenting XD
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