(#) tortillachip 2012-07-19I think this is great! It was really interesting to read. I thought the description about how much he wished he didn't say anything or the teachers didn't hear and how he was really nervous to do the student-student counseling was terrific. The language was so vivid that I could practically feel Frank's nervousness and his regret of ever saying anything to his teachers. I really liked that even if Frank didn't want the counselor help or the student help, he did kind of know that he had issues. I also really liked how you introduced us to Frank's problem with the paperclip daisy chain. I thought that was really clever and creative. This was really original and written
really well. You really did pull me into Frank's world. Great job and I'm so excited to see what's next!!!
Author's responseThanks! I'm glad you found it interesting because I wasn't sure if it was a little too dull, what with there being no actual dialogue yet. It's good to know that you thought the bit about his nervousness worked out alright; I really wanted to get across how he was feeling, all his regret about ever opening his mouth. The paperclip daisy chain just kinda popped into my head when I couldn't think of how to start this, so I'm glad you thought that worked out alright as an opener.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a kind and detailed review! :D
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-07-19EEEEE! NEW CHAPTER FIC! YOU DON'T KNOW HOW EXCITED I AM ABOUT THIS!
The concept is great and original, as your writing usually is. Poor Sparky :( at least he didn't actually explode or something..
Love this and can't wait for you to update!
Author's responseHehe, good to know you're as excited about this as I am! ;D
Thank you very much! And yeah; poor Sparky, even if he did make it out alive.
Thanks! :) :) :D
(#) MisfitKid7 2012-07-20Oh mah gee! This is such a good idea and Im betting the storys gonna be amazing! Update soon =) xo
Author's responseThank you very much; I hope the story does turn out to be alright! I'll probably have the next chapter up either tomorrow or Sunday.
Thanks for the review! :D
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-07-20Meep. This story is utterly frankable. Love the idea, and it's already made me giggle :3 I've never read a chaptered fic of yours before, but this one promises to be as good (although very different) as your songs and poems. Can't wait for your update- this is added to my alerts ;D
Author's responseFirst of all: Frankable = my new favorite word.
Thank you very much! Normally I suck at making giggle-worthy writing, so I'm glad you think it's working alright in that department. I hope this chaptered fic lives up to your expectations!
Thank you very much for such a nice review; it really does mean a lot! :D
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