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Our Lips Touch
(#) Alexandra_Day 2012-07-23
Wow creepy like the first one to review on this chapter... heh I love this story! It's short, but I like that. It's like good sex and esspresso's from star bucks; short, sweet and too the point. In conclusion yet another epic addition to the adorable tale! Yay XD
Xoxo AAuthor's response
Yay, Thankyou.Our Lips Touch
(#) BleedingValentine 2012-07-23
Heeheeheehee! I've had millions of arguments with myself, except it's usually my imaginary friend Zak arguing with me. I can sit at home having conversations with him for ages.
Update soon?
BleedingValentine xxAuthor's response
I talk to myself out loud if I’m nerves, lost or scared and I always end up telling myself to shut up, then i can't help but smile because i think it's ironic I’m telling myself to shout up out loud.:)
I’ll try and update when i can (i just got to think of what’s going to happen next, I have some ideas).Our Lips Touch
(#) MyNomDePlume 2012-07-23
I absolutely love how you get directly into Frank's head. This is an awesome story. :)Author's response
Thank you, i love getting review it makes me so happy:) YAY.Our Lips Touch
(#) MCRfreak15 2012-07-27
D':
You seriously need to update this:D
I wanna know what happened! Did they reeeeally kiss? If not, how did he bump his head?
If Gerard decides to keep it a secret from Frank because he thinks it's for the better.....how is HE gonna explain Frank hitting his head?
ORRRRR....mabye they had sex and then Gerard knocked him out?
Or maybe, this is just gonna turn into a smut:D
(.....i'm a perv xD)
or......YOU COULD JUST TELL MEEEE?:D
Author's response
hee hee hee, I like you.
to tell the truth i'm making the story up as i go along:) so i don't even know whats going to happen next.
I’ll try and update soon, I’ve currently been busy doing school exams, hiding from a stalker-like soon to be x-boyfriend, and battling a viscous virus. (Yay fun!...not)
Thank you for the review and I’ll push myself to write the next chapter soon :)Our Lips Touch
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-07-27
I absolutely love this, it's awesome!
Did they actually kiss? Or did he dream? I think they did... I'mma say they did :P
Update soon?
~BulletproofNinja xoAuthor's response
Thank you, i'll update soon:)Our Lips Touch
(#) BLEEDINontheFLOOR 2012-07-27
I think you need to update. It's one of my new favs :DAuthor's response
oh wow i'm in you favs, that just made my day. thank you and i'll update soon.Our Lips Touch
(#) imakilljoywannabe 2012-07-31
Thanks for the comment at the beginning, I just love your story! It's so awesome and funny and.....just....PERFECTION!!! GAHHHH THE FEELS!!! Anyways, update update update as always!
Hee hee I'm commenting on all your chapters even if you already wrote a new one XD I love doing random things! So much fun.... Also I think they did kiss! Just saying. :DAuthor's response
Your welcome, after all it was your comment that made me push myself to write the chapter ;)
Thank you so much for saying that you 'love' my story. YAY!
P.s. I commented on nearly all the chapters of this story i liked (but they didn't respond to all my comment ): but that’s ok because they make long responses to my comment on recent chapters. :) )
hee hee hee... it will all become clear if they kissed or not in the Sixth chapter:) (Suspense)
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