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Here Comes Trouble AKA: The Internet
(#) saugart 2006-08-25
Where can I find a copy of "The Toad's True Heritage"? Or is this just a title you made up?
I enjoyed the three paragraphs of it :)
You write: "Percy somehow had the feeling that the only reason she gives a care..."
You are having some grammar problems there, with the sequence of English tenses. It would be more natural to write "Percy somehow had the feeling that the only reason she cared was..."
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