(#) xXxILoveFrankIeroxXx 2012-08-03Amazing like always. SOOOOO, I think you should drag this out a bit, not like TOOOO long but don't go into a real thick, twisty plot TOO soon. Ya know? Make it all intense and crap. Well, now I feel like I'm telling you how to write your story so I apologize becuase I CERTAINLY dont have room to do that, what with all my crappy fics.
Author's responseAwww, thank you! I'm just not too sure HOW to drag it out. Oh, I shall figure le something out soon! cheers xx
- I feel like my review was too short. Sorry about that. My dad broke my laptop and I have to use my old one which is incredibly irritating. XD But I think you should drag it out medium length wise if that makes any sense. XD xx
Author's responseOwchy. That does sound annoying. I wasn't gonna make it like, fifty chapters. I can't do that. I was just wondering how to not jump right into the thick of things right away, but I think I have an idea or two now xx
(#) Thankyou4TheVenom 2012-08-09Aah,this is a fab story so far. I'm really picky about Frerard fan fiction,and even though I adore it,I can only read certain ones.
Anyway,I agree with all the other reviews,and pleasepleaseplease update soon c:
Author's responseAwww, thank you so much! I'm very glad you like it! I'll try update soon-ish, but it's hard cos I have lots of shit piling up atm. thanks for reading though :D xx
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-08-27This is just so good, honey. Your writing style and the little world you've created with this story I think is really unique. It might be a relatively common storyline (the high school frerard part), but you've very much made it your own, and I find the characters intriguing- you don't give too much or too little about them away, so I'm kept hooked and wanting more.
Oh, and Frank's comebacks? So awesome.
Can't wait to read more!
Author's responseI know that the high school thing is pretty well-used, but I do try! Thank you so much xx
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