Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > Sometimes, You Can Repair What's Hidden
Chapter Four
6 reviewsI’d talked to the guy properly only once or twice, and I never saw him outside of lessons. Perhaps I was just there for the sake of being there...
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Sometimes, You Can Repair What's Hidden
(#) tmbfucks 2012-08-03
This is amazing! Update soon! XD xxAuthor's response
I'll try xxSometimes, You Can Repair What's Hidden
(#) xXxILoveFrankIeroxXx 2012-08-03
Amazing like always. SOOOOO, I think you should drag this out a bit, not like TOOOO long but don't go into a real thick, twisty plot TOO soon. Ya know? Make it all intense and crap. Well, now I feel like I'm telling you how to write your story so I apologize becuase I CERTAINLY dont have room to do that, what with all my crappy fics.Author's response
Awww, thank you! I'm just not too sure HOW to drag it out. Oh, I shall figure le something out soon! cheers xxSometimes, You Can Repair What's Hidden
(#) tmbfucks 2012-08-03
I feel like my review was too short. Sorry about that. My dad broke my laptop and I have to use my old one which is incredibly irritating. XD But I think you should drag it out medium length wise if that makes any sense. XD xxAuthor's response
Owchy. That does sound annoying. I wasn't gonna make it like, fifty chapters. I can't do that. I was just wondering how to not jump right into the thick of things right away, but I think I have an idea or two now xxSometimes, You Can Repair What's Hidden
(#) Thankyou4TheVenom 2012-08-09
Aah,this is a fab story so far. I'm really picky about Frerard fan fiction,and even though I adore it,I can only read certain ones.
Anyway,I agree with all the other reviews,and pleasepleaseplease update soon c:Author's response
Awww, thank you so much! I'm very glad you like it! I'll try update soon-ish, but it's hard cos I have lots of shit piling up atm. thanks for reading though :D xxSometimes, You Can Repair What's Hidden
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-08-27
This is just so good, honey. Your writing style and the little world you've created with this story I think is really unique. It might be a relatively common storyline (the high school frerard part), but you've very much made it your own, and I find the characters intriguing- you don't give too much or too little about them away, so I'm kept hooked and wanting more.
Oh, and Frank's comebacks? So awesome.
Can't wait to read more!
Lucy X_OAuthor's response
I know that the high school thing is pretty well-used, but I do try! Thank you so much xxSometimes, You Can Repair What's Hidden
(#) starbucksforgerard 2013-11-25
Wow
This is just so great oMG
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