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Tomorrow

by darks00 4 reviews

Julius is on his deathbed. He only asks Delilah for one last favor.

Category: Delilah and Julius - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Published: 2006-07-12 - Updated: 2006-07-12 - 1017 words - Complete

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Tomorrow

(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-07-12

Ok it was good, but truthfully not your best. But it was origanal and alright. Keep writing.
Author's response
Hmm do you have any ideas of where can I improve? Thanks for reviewing!

xxDarkness' Kidxx

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