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10. True colours
13 reviewsI wish I had the guts to do something like that. 'what? wear pink shoes?'
5Exciting
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Our Lips Touch
(#) KatIeroWay 2012-08-16
I love this story.Author's response
oh wow! just those simple words made me so happy:) thank you.XOXO.Our Lips Touch
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-08-16
Aww Frankie. You're a hero! An adorable, fun sized hero!
Vic seems like a proper cutie, are we going to see more of him?
And ZOMG FRONKEH IS GOING TO MEET GEE!!!!
Update soon? I really wanna know what they talk about :P
~BulletproofNinja xoAuthor's response
hell yeah, Vic's gonna be an importain part of this story...(I think)
thank you for the coment.Our Lips Touch
(#) BLEEDINontheFLOOR 2012-08-16
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. omg what is Gee going to do? Update soon!Author's response
I might update soon, just got school work and shit to get through. thank you for the comment:)Our Lips Touch
(#) RubyLuck 2012-08-16
OMG I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. Frankies so brave!!! I can't wait to see what him and Gee talk about. I know you just updated today but please update soonAuthor's response
If I'm feeling it i might wright more tonight:)
thank you for the comment.Our Lips Touch
(#) Hostile_Halo 2012-08-16
update soon please im super eager to see what gee and fronkah talk about! xD
xox
HHaloAuthor's response
I'm looking foward to wrighting the next chapter i just go to think it up first:) thank you for the comment.
that 'go' is ment to be a 'got'. oops:)Our Lips Touch
(#) MissFilthyDivineMCR 2012-08-16
Had to rate this story exciting! :))) I am literally SO EXCITED!!! I think adding in Vic to the story was to help Frank accept himself, which you were planning right? :D Loved it!! Update soon!! :))) Btw, since I'm a ghost, I can walk through walls and I can also make people see me still or sometimes not. :P All up to me when I want people to know when I'm there. XD
Love, Sabrina XOXO
~Stay Beautiful, Keep It Ugly~Author's response
Yay thanking you so much for the rating. and your a smart fucking cookie (your right about Vic).
and fuck yeah i can now say i'm friends with a ghost ( i can say your my friend right? like i know i killed you and everything but we shouldn't let that stop us from been friends :D)
P.S. can you like possess peoples bodies?
thanks for the comment:)Our Lips Touch
(#) imakilljoywannabe 2012-08-16
AWESOME CHAPTER!!! You definitely deserve the party with MCR I promised you! Vic seems ok, just DO NOT let Frank fall for him cuz then I would find you and kill you in your sleep. JK but still don't do it. (sorry if that was a little weird but I've read too many stories where some other character comes in that Gee or Frankie falls for instead and it annoys me and makes me go insane like pulling out my hair upset and stuff so yeah) If you promise not to do that and give me a good chapter I will give you...... ummmm........ something I shall think of later!!! Update soon I need to hear what goes down between Gee and Frankie! :DAuthor's response
THANK YOU! WHooP WHooP party, your invited:)
I'm tempted to make Frankie hook up with Vic just to see if you rally would come and find me(that could be interesting, i could meet you in real life...just before you kill me...wait you said in my sleep:( FUCK, well that just blow my plans out of the water).
AnyWay I wont make them hook up...Because i love you (in a non creepy way:)
I Promise not to make Frankie Hook up With VIC.
thank you for the comment, i always love them.XOXO>Our Lips Touch
(#) RockMusic 2012-08-16
Too tired to leave a proper review that's all long and semi-entertaining and praising your great work. Had a long day. But just know it was awesome :) I really like Vic's character :)Author's response
Awww thank you, hope you get some sleep:)Our Lips Touch
(#) smylekidd 2012-08-16
I LOVE this story so much!!! Just wanted to tell you that the only reason I got an account on here was to tell you how AMAZINGLY AWESOME it was!!! XD PLEASE WRITE MOAR!!!Author's response
OMG!!!! I fucking love you. WOW You had me blushing and yes im going to admit screaming like a Fan-Girl wow. you got an account just so you could express how you felt about my story. OMG You are making me feel so loved WoW.XOXO.
welcome to the dark side...we have Frerards:D
thank you.Our Lips Touch
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-08-17
AWW Frankie-Boy!!!!! Frank saves the day!! Now he can be like his favorite super hero!!! Batman!!!!! Really good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's response
Yay:) thank you.
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