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Our Lips Touch
(#) RockMusic 2012-08-18
FUCK YEAH FUTHA MUCKA!!!
Frank so adorable, shoelaces.
So cute. Mr. Davie(I think, I kept reading it as Dahvie and I was just 'When Dahvie become a prick' then I was all... 'ohhhhh Davie')
Great chapter. Frerard so perfect.
Vic seems nice.
I love you, I that non-creepy way (okay, maybe in that slightly creepy way)
Can't wait for your next update (omgee that rhymes, I so smart)Author's response
yay:) sometimes Creepiness is good and hey love is love and i'll take all i can get...(Love, gimme love, gimme love, I don't need it
But I'll take what I want from your heart and I'll keep it
In a bag, in a box , put an X on the floor
Gimme more, gimme more, gimme more, shut up and sing it with me...)
hum...sorry about that, i got a little carried away.
anyway thanks for the comment:)
Our Lips Touch
(#) MissFilthyDivineMCR 2012-08-18
I am sooo excited for that kiss!!!!! :33 Awwwww, it's so cute. That hoodie scene made me giggle and turn into mess of cuteness! :P Update soon!
Love, Sabrina XOXO
~Stay Beautiful, KeepIt Ugly~Author's response
hehehe(mess of cuteness) that is so cute! I'll try and Update soon. thank you for the comment.Our Lips Touch
(#) imakilljoywannabe 2012-08-18
All right, all right. ~pouts~ You can have Frankie back. Whom, by the way, I was NOT depriving of caffeine, I just threatened to and then he was quiet so he got his caffeine. And yes you finally get Mikey and his unicorns! You have a complete set now! (Unless you want Bob too?...He could be your next present!)
People probably were like WTF on the last part because unless they read all the comments they have no idea what you mean! Hooray!
Now Frank must kiss Gee because it is his destiny. He cannot deny his destiny! He and I both need chapter 12 so that his destiny may be fulfilled! The power of Frerard commands it! (And ok so maybe me too) At the jacket part I was just like ~melts into pool and must be cleaned up off the floor~ because t was so PERFECTLY ADORABLE!!!!! Poor Gee must be so confused right now.... The conversation must be finished! If you finish soon you get Bob Bryar! (And whatever you want to go with him!) YAY LET SKITTLES RAIN DOWN UPON THIS GREAT LAND!!!
The great Frank Iero commands it! (and just so you know he's MY Frankie TOO) But you get custody of him for now... at least I wasn't treating him like I would the prisoners at my jail! However, that is another story but if you want I shall tell it to you later. Right now I must go do some random task! So long for now! XOXO (P.S. I WILL get Frankie back...somehow...WHEN YOU ARE LEAST EXPECTING IT! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
~maniacal laughter~ but then again that's not for a while so he's safe for now.... yeah.... eh I'll get him someday. In the meantime I will enjoy some chocolate!) Okay now goodbye for realAuthor's response
~Hugs Frankie so tight and cheeks Frankie’s caffeine levels~
Alright your story checks out, his caffeine levels are normal.
WOW ~gawks at Unicorns and Mikey Way~ so pretty.
Why not get BoB? He was a part of MCR for some time. And I'm going to write him into my story soon.
~Fives you for confusing the fuck out of people if they hadn't read our comments~
What happens if i deny his destiny?;)
What will come with Bob Bryar? he needs to come with something. and yes let it rain skittles, just not over Frankie’s head:)
Yay custody! ok how bout we share Frankie boy so then he won’t have to keep watching his back every five minutes looking out for some crazy check wanting to gage him with their little brothers socks?
Ahh? What jail? plz do tell:)
P.S. love the maniacal laughter.
And I want some chocolate!!!:) :D XD I just had great idea... that’s what can go with bob...CHOCOLATE!!! Yay.
You know I love your comments, thank you for them:)
oops that 'cheeks' at the start is ment to be 'checks'. (awkward)
and again 'looking over his shoulder for some crazy check' yeah that 'check' is ment to be 'chick' oops (awkward)Our Lips Touch
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-08-19
ASDFGHJKL OHMYGEE!!!!! This. Jus- Just this.
This is such an amazing story! I love love love love LOVE this.
It was so cute!!!! Frankie and his staring contest, i always win against my shoes. XD
Gerard was the cutest thing in this chapter, he's so awkward!
Update soon? I really love this XD
~BulletproofNinja xoAuthor's response
Thank you, I'll try and Update soon:)Our Lips Touch
(#) MrsWayBeckett 2012-08-19
Ahhh this chapter was great!! :D
It was too cute when Gee was like 'take mah hoodie I'm not cold' just... Awww'h sooooo cute!
Anywhore I hope you update again soon! :)Author's response
Awwww your right it is just so cute :3 thank you for the comment I'll try and update soon.Our Lips Touch
(#) Hostile_Halo 2012-08-19
yay! new chapter *new chapter dance party* awww that was so cute with the hoodie XD am I the only here that thinks Vic likes Frank? maybe thats just me...anyway can't wait for you're next update!
xox
HHaloAuthor's response
I so wanna be at that *new chapter dance party*
Ahhh Vic... He’s a developing Character but I do have some big plans for him (maybe, i'm still working it out). And I promised 'imakilljoywannabe' that Frank and Vic wont hook up.
I'm glad you like my story and I'll try and update soon. thank you for the comment.Our Lips Touch
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-08-20
‘coffee and cigarettes with the hint of Gerard’.
It’s fucking heaven in a hoodie!
I can just hear Franks inner mocking thoughts 'Aww look Frankie-Boy! You got a number one fan!!!'
'Shut up'
'No I will not shut. thanks for the suggestion though... not'
this is sooooo fucking adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's response
Thank you:D I'll try and update soon:)Our Lips Touch
(#) BLEEDINontheFLOOR 2012-08-20
Aww it's adorable! Love it!Author's response
YAY thank you:)
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