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If you tend to think things are either beautiful or ugly, it's time to wake up. It's morning.
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(#) aweirdtree 2012-09-12
you know, this makes me want to know how to compose and sing because that way i could turn this into a song :D it's amazing like that (:Author's response
I don't know if I mentioned it before, but this does have a melody, actually :) It's a little funny how you managed to pin-point one of the few of my poems that has a melody, though :D And thank you so much :3Tramps like us
(#) AdnarimSmada 2012-10-26
Man this makes me want to write a one shot using this as the base really bad.
Then again, it hits me that I think everything has been conveyed perfectly in the poem and I would just be trying to get something across that is abstract with my words.
Maybe what you're talking about can only be understood in the abstract of the mind.
It was lovely.
-Adnarim SmadaAuthor's response
Thank you! :D
I am so flattered by this, you don't even know. I was like, wow, and then I was like, really?! And now I'm just curious, so if you still feel like doing something with this as a base, feel free :) (As long as you show me the eventual results, man. That's like, mandatory)
Again, thank you so much :)Tramps like us
(#) AdnarimSmada 2012-11-05
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Well, I hope you find this little halfway passable for such a beautiful poem.
-Adnarim SmadaAuthor's response
It's wonderful! :) I love how different it is from the vision I had in mind when I wrote the poem, because that's probably the one thing I need right now, even though this might not have been the happiest story.
Also, I'm sorry I've been gone for a while, internet gave me the silent treatment.
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