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Dealing with Dementors
15 reviewsThe Last Battle has been fought, and Harry Potter has won. The price, however, has been high. Nearly every person Harry cared for is dead, maimed, or otherwise injured. The magical culture of Bri...
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Harry's Second Chance
(#) saugart 2006-07-31
Minor suggestion:
Ron, who apparently thought
you were androgenous
You mean "androgynous". "Androgenous" is a different word.Harry's Second Chance
(#) saugart 2006-07-31
Actually, if Ron had thought she was "androgenous", it might be a Wizardly way of saying that she made him feel Manly :).Harry's Second Chance
(#) spacedout 2006-09-03
Well, for a harry/hermione this story isn't bad. It's a reasonable way for the tale to have developed, that being said you've fallen into the trap of ron/ginny bashing. I've always thought ron was there as comic relief. As for ginny, well her mother was fertile and had more kids than hermione's mother did. Of course that's such a crass thing for someone to say that few other than a gay male would say it... Hope your hermione has lots of magical kids, looking forward to the rest of the story.Harry's Second Chance
(#) LabRat 2012-10-13
So a stag for his dad, a wolf for Remus, a dog for Sirius, a parrot for Moody, a phoenix for Dumbledore, an otter for Hermione, and what I'm guessing is a Snorkack for Luna.Author's response
No, it was a cave bear; I have to admit I forget why!
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