- This chapter was amazing and well worth the wait. You could tell that you have really put a lot of effort into this. I actually like the slow progression of the relationship between Frank and Gerard, it makes it seems more realistic - if that makes any sense?
Your use of imagery is amazing as always and I am excited to see where the story goes from here :)
(#) MCRkilljoy 2012-10-20Random fact about moi: I like this one girl, and everytime I look at her, my stomach gets all achy and I start to shiver, but in a good way.
This chapter made me feel exactly like that. It was so intense! The way you described it so vividly, I could practically feel the kiss! It really was worth the 29 chapter wait!!
Okay, just realised my heart beat was increased too. That's how good this was. It had several physical effects, aswell and emotional and mental ones. I really do worship you!
(#) destinationdestroya 2012-10-20Oh my gosh, I can't even- I think I might cry, this chapter, this story, is so good! You could be a famous writer one day, your writing is just wow. I always get really excited when I see you've written something because asdfghjkl I CAN'T DESCRIBE IT.
(#) JessicaAlexandra 2012-10-20I have no words to describe my emotions so for once my review will be short. Haha. I was so happy and it was definitely worth the wait and it akways will be hun. Anyway good luck one the exams, I'm sure you will do fabulous. But please give us more ferard kisses sometimes soon. I'll be waiting.
p.s. this whole chapter was full of so much anticipation I almost died. But it made that kiss so much better.
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-10-20I can't handle this. The way you write is so full of emotion, I fell everything. Shit, I kinda wanna cry right now, and I don't even know why.
This story is just so beautiful, absolutely brilliant, and I thank you so much for writing this.
You don't drag things out, you write everything in perfect detail, and the wait is DEFINITELY worth it.
I just hope that Gerard stays this way and doesn't shut himself off from Frank again. But Ocean... Hmm, she annoys me. Like, a lot. She just has no regard for anyone else's feelings, and she irritates me. But oh my god, Mikey's adorable. XD
Update when you can, I am in love with this. When I saw the new chapter, I died a little inside from excitement.
- This chapter was amazing, because I could feel it all, especially when Gerard brushed Frank's hair away, I could really feel it.... So basically your writing is amazing and I'm sure that if you keep writing you'll publish a book some day and I'll buy it for sure
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