Jack and Elizabeth have things they need to tell one another. Jack/Elizabeth.
I liked your story much better than #2 Dead Man's Chest, at least you make Jack less of wimp! #2 had too much unnecessary crap and scuzzy people covered in Barnacles.
Lovely first, mate. The dialogue was a bit confusing, and I had to read it over a few times until I figure it out, and the dialogue was a bit miss-placed. But all in all i loved it. More more more!!
You know what? I couldn't tell it was your first try at POTC. It was great. I loved it. Write more. I like the fact that Elizabeth and Jack are hooking up. LOOOVE IIIT!! So keep up the good work!
loved the idea of elizabeth and jack :D continue... savvy?
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