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31. Frisson
10 reviewsGod I wanna kiss him, I wanna taste that toothpaste and make him moan for me. In the middle of a groceries store? Ok…I need to control myself.
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Our Lips Touch
(#) FightingForever 2012-11-08
Asdfghjkl!!! Its so freakin adorable!!! I get mega excited when i see updates on this I LOVE IT!!!Author's response
Thank you! :DOur Lips Touch
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-11-08
!!!!!!! I love this story!!! I love the part where Gerard steals s kiss from Frank for a millsecond.Author's response
I loved writing that part X) I thought it was just so cute! thank you for the comment.Our Lips Touch
(#) jessloui 2012-11-08
YAY!!! So excited that this has been updated. Who is it though?? Can't wait for the next chapter.Author's response
You'll find out eventually I promise! thank you for the comment (I'll see you on tweeter ;).....)Our Lips Touch
(#) SeeYouInHellKid 2012-11-08
my rating points were feeling deserted for a minute there ;D
seriously this has been on my mind since passing it, shouldn't it be "probable possibilities" not "possible possibilities" or did the coffee in the middle of the night and heavy metal gone straight to my head?
whatever. Crazy grammer bitch'll shut her gob now :x
are the mysterious boys original characters?Author's response
LOL X)I thought it was 'impossible possibilities' but i could be wrong :)
the mysterious boys are based on real people, I love their music and I thought that they would be great in this story X)you'll find out who they are when I next update X)
thank you for commenting.Our Lips Touch
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-11-09
Damn, I love this chapter!!! That shopkeeper is an arse though... -_-
Who are the boys???? Update soon, 'cause I reeeeaaaallllyyyy wanna know XD
~BulletproofNinja xo
Author's response
I so wanna tell who the boys are but you have to wait till next update. & the shopkeeper is an arse because he's a shopkeeper in NJ, a lot of crime and he probable loses a lot of income due to shop lifters and are robbery. :)
thank you for commenting.
Oops, that's meant to be
'probably' not 'probable' and 'arm robbery' not 'are robbery'
soz I only just woke up :)Our Lips Touch
(#) BLEEDINontheFLOOR 2012-11-09
Interesting....I'm guessing they're like...robbers? or something XDAuthor's response
X)lol they are not robbers. but nice guess :) All will be reviled in the next update.
thank you for commenting.Our Lips Touch
(#) SeeYouInHellKid 2012-11-09
:o BLEEDINontheFLOOR you just fucked my mind! i didn't even think of that!!Author's response
LOL!Our Lips Touch
(#) partypoisionsgirl 2012-11-09
I really really love love love this story pls pls pls update soon pls!Author's response
sorry I haven't updated, I will one day I promise.
thank you for commenting.Our Lips Touch
(#) Ophthal 2012-11-10
Hey this is excellent, I wonder who's in the store?? I hope they're not bad news!!!
I LOVE Gee & Frankie, please don't let Lyn-Z come between them!!! I think it would be so sweet if Cass & Mikey fell for each other!! :D
I hope Eric's attitude changes!!Author's response
:D thank you. Who doesn't love Gee & Frankie? they are just too cute!
thank you for commenting.Our Lips Touch
(#) imakilljoywannabe 2012-11-10
GAH sorry I never have time to review anymore! I love the story- those two in the store better not mess with Gee and Frankie's relationship! PWEASE DON'T LET THEM!!!! IF THEY DO I SHALL RELEASE MY HYPERACTIVE DOG AND LITTLE KID ARMY UPON THEM AND HAVE MY NINJAS TRACK THEM DOWN!!! But they can be anything else! :3 sorry about that little rant there, it's your story, do what you want with it! Anyways, love the chapter- CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT!!! UPDATE ASAHP!!!!Author's response
LOL remind me never to get on your bad side. :) Thank you so much for commenting.
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