For Heartbreak_Beauty's Challenge; Based off of Little Smirk by Theory of a Deadman
See? This is fucking incredible!
-Looks- mmm mm, no.. Look at yours, and Ash's I DON'T STAND A CHANCE
ZACK AS IN MERRICK, OR.
YES ZACK MERRICK
She thought it felt empty without a ATL refrence
-makes weird sheep noises-
Holy fucking shit, Sam.
... wow, do you hate Kassper a lot?
:D I'm just messin' wit ya.
Anyway this was AHHH IT WAS AMAZING
Yeah I think this was a ploy to get back at me for repedatly calling her a dumbass
Plot: 2 points. I really didn’t feel connected with the plot in this one. It feels as if you just threw the ending together.
Characters: 4 points
Content Knowledge: 4 points
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