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(#) aweirdtree 2012-11-28this makes me feel kind of melancholic and nostalgic at the same time. for some reason, it also makes me somehow peaceful. i don't know, there's no reason for me to feel like that after reading this, but yeah. i like it a lot - i love the umbrella (: thank you!
Author's responseThis is based on a dream I had, actually. Strangely enough it made me feel kind of peaceful in a way too, I think it's because it's one of those dreams that have a distinct start and finish and no lingering loose threads. So yeah.
And thank you :)
(#) AdnarimSmada 2012-12-02"No good deed goes unpunished" maybe? Nice guys finish last and yet the subject is maybe just slightly flawed and not as innocent as she acts?
Anyway, just to let you know I could feel the location and everything else about this.
Author's responseI don't even know about this one yet, and it's been MONTHS since I wrote it. But I'm glad you liked it :)
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