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Harry Potter and the Shen Long Pirates
(#) DnG 2012-12-02
Well, I am a little lost with the Ranma stuff, but other than that, it seems to be OK!
A little rough around the edges, a bit of polishing, etc. and it would be fine. And no, I am not offering to Beta. Its one thing to listen to typos with my screen reader, but a completely different idea altogether to do the grammar thing. Anyways, keep it up as I am hooked and want to read more.
Oh, it definitely caught me off-guard with Hermione's parentage, definitely a different take on things. Does Harry know that they're a couple? Since she is a God, will Harry inherit similar powers once he has fulfilled his destiny? I am assuming that's how Hermione's family did. I mean, I heard my sister go on and on about Buffy and Angel in the day, but I never knew that Zander, Cordelia, Faith, Willow, etc. became immortal.
Author's response
Ranma 1/2 was an anime in the early '90s. It was about a boy who gains a sex-changing curse when applied with cold water.
I wasn't asking for you to be a betareader just what sounded wrong to you.
If you are talking about Harry and Hermione being a couple; no, not yet. I mean come on, he's sees her as a really good friend but, he'll figure it out.
If you had 'read' Allfather then you'd know that Zander and Cordelia had became Gods. The story will be continued and for right now I'm trying to get who I wanted in that pathenon.
Let me know if you are confused about anything and I'll try to clear it up for you. Okay?Harry Potter and the Shen Long Pirates
(#) DnG 2012-12-02
One more thing before I forget, thanks for adding some description to the story, it helps immensely. Keep up the good work.
Harry Potter and the Shen Long Pirates
(#) DnG 2012-12-04
Based off of your latest response, I most definitely will reply if something doesn't make any sense. Until then, happy writing.
Harry Potter and the Shen Long Pirates
(#) bob26 2012-12-05
I like the story, Ranma I am unfamliar with but sounds different.
Please moreHarry Potter and the Shen Long Pirates
(#) stealthkite 2012-12-23
So far reading the 3 chapters im hooked and can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work.
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