(#) NotKissingYouGoodBye 2012-12-07Oh that was so gooooooooooooooooooood X) loved it! it was kinda simple but really meaning full X) I really LOVE the part where Gee kisses Frank on the shoulders , idk why but it just felt really natural and passionate when reading it X)the movements of their hands and everything was just wonderful X).XOXO.
Author's responseThank you so much :) I didn't really want it to be complicated and awkward to read and stuff, i just wanted it to be like loving? Like they are physically expressing love and not just lust i hope that it came out that way. I am so super glad you enjoyed it the next chapter will be up soon xo
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