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I Miss You
3 reviewsKind of going through the relationship my brother and I had with my father from start to finish. Just what I wish I could say to him.
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I Miss You
(#) GotSparkle 2012-12-11
Always here if you need me. It's good. I like this. Not the ending and end parts, obviously.... But its well written.Author's response
Thanks love :)I Miss You
(#) Mirazal 2012-12-11
-gives you hug-
This is really sad, but writing with emotion is a very good thing. It's good to let it out and stuff.
I think you're an excellent writer. You've also apparently been through shit, bur you're here today and I admire you for that.
-gives another hug-Author's response
Thank you darling! I actually haven't been through nearly as much shit as my brother, but he handles it better. I actually almost WASN'T here.I Miss You
(#) AshIsNotOnFire 2012-12-11
Oh god, Leslie.. That honestly made me want to cry, that's amazing. I'm so sorry, I hate to know what you've been through, just know that I'll always be here for you.Author's response
Awww I didn't want to make you cry! I just needed to let some stuff out. thank you though sweetie.
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