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Happenings
3 reviewsJay gets the surprise of his life when someone shows up at school threatning his way of life.
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The Art of Song
(#) NuuoaEclaire 2006-07-25
I liked how you started it. Obviously it was Neil. YOu could work on not skipping in between setting so much. But so far so good. Keep it up.The Art of Song
(#) TORCH 2006-07-25
Well this chapter was very funny. Loved the Mr. Bigglesworth name. Try not to skip into new senes so soon and try for longer paragraphs.
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