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• Harry Potter and the MAU

  (#) COLD1 2012-12-09

  I'm going to have to go with...dafuq?
  
  nonsensical with no back-story does not a plot-line make.

• Harry Potter and the MAU

  (#) dogbertcarroll 2012-12-09

  Harry knows dick about the muggle world not even allowed to watch TV by the Dursleys, so none of this made sense. Just write an honest SI with yourself as the main character taking his place.

• Harry Potter and the MAU

  (#) Dave0126 2012-12-13

  http://www.fictionmania.tv/searchdisplay/storycatdisplay.html?startat=97&word=1049
  
  The original location of the Morphic Adaptation Unit stuff.

• Harry Potter and the MAU

  (#) animesam 2012-12-28

  It is a little fast but for a quick read and something fun I think it is Ok. Remember people this is A.U. any thing can happen.

• Harry Potter and the MAU

  (#) gandalftg 2014-01-25

  I'm glad you liked Worthless. I enjoy writing it, but got stuck on it a while back, and haven't figured out how to make it go forward.
  
  As a fan of the MAU stories myself (wouldn't have written Worthless otherwise) I would like to suggest that you slow this down a lot. Part of the point of the MAU stories is in showing the character figuring out how to operate the device and learning about how it operates. Harry just magically knows how to operate it.
  
  I would also suggest that you review some of J.R. Parz's works and descriptions of the device. What you describe here, and the actual descriptions of the device are very different.
  
  And for the record, there are several things that the MAU can't/won't do. The list basically boils down to two items.
  1: The MAU will not cause harm (as defined by the mind of the user).
  2: The MAU can not create life.
  
  The MAU is part detective story, part genie story. Skip neither! :)
  
  Otherwise, I think this shows promise, just slow down, and don't skip over the fun parts, like Harry figuring out what it does, and how he figures out what it's called.

• Harry Potter and the MAU

  (#) gandalftg 2014-01-25

  er, sorry... jr parz wrote Master PC, NOT MAU. THAT was Elrod, of course. My apologies for the wrong attribution.

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