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Eroninja
During his training trip, Naruto is given a scroll which holds the secrets in how to seduce and ensnare women. A scroll he uses at first on the women and kunoichi around him but soon on the Shinob...
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Eroninja
(#) Breezyanimetra 2017-01-04
This story is amazing I'm up to chapter 41. I have never read anything like this before porn with an excellent plot. Great Job!Eroninja
(#) ecscape 2017-01-12
I'm always impressed by the patience that goes into your stories. So many authors rush to wrap up all the loose ends soon after starting a storyline, and certainly at the end of an arc. The long-term vision and unresolved, but often visited storylines, from Kyomi's conversion, to the Chunin exams and most recently the state of affairs in the Hyuuga family, keeps me turning the virtual pages. Amazing lemon writing that shows the same patience and love as the overall story doesn't hurt, either. Keep writing, LemonSage! Make the world a better place with smut!Eroninja
(#) The-Critic-Sage-13 2017-03-26
Wow TLS..... just wow ur so great at this hope you continue writing stuff like this and I agree with *
@TheLastNanaya ur the only reason i made a ficwad accountEroninja
(#) The-Critic-Sage-13 2017-03-26
Wow TLS..... just wow ur so great at this hope you continue writing stuff like this and I agree with *
@TheLastNanaya ur the only reason i made a ficwad accountEroninja
(#) The-Critic-Sage-13 2017-03-26
Wow TLS..... just wow ur so great at this hope you continue writing stuff like this and I agree with *
@TheLastNanaya ur the only reason i made a ficwad accountEroninja
(#) The-Critic-Sage-13 2017-03-26
Wow TLS..... just wow ur so great at this hope you continue writing stuff like this and I agree with *
@TheLastNanaya ur the only reason i made a ficwad accountEroninja
(#) The-Critic-Sage-13 2017-03-26
Wow TLS..... just wow ur so great at this hope you continue writing stuff like this and I agree with *
@TheLastNanaya ur the only reason i made a ficwad account
Eroninja
(#) The-Critic-Sage-13 2017-03-26
Wow TLS..... just wow ur so great at this hope you continue writing stuff like this and I agree with *
@TheLastNanaya ur the only reason i made a ficwad accountEroninja
(#) MindForged 2017-04-13
I've really quite enjoyed this fanfic. It's clear you put a lot of effort into structuring the plot and pacing it properly so that the story arcs are related to each other and flow into each other nicely. It's that kind of cohesiveness that really makes this whole fanfic worth reading (and now rereading) for me.
I only have a few sparse, and relatively minor, criticisms. Sometimes it feels a bit much when you have randos competing with Tailed Beasts. Like the Four Heavenly Kings attacking the TBs at Kiyomi'Kiyomi's mansion. I get that they were augmented someone, but it somewhat stretches my ability to accept that a substance could exist in the Naruto world that brings people's chakra to the level of a Tailed Beast's. Even with the Akatsuki, they were able to compete for reasons that made sense within the world's rules: Kismet could absorb tons of chakra with Samehada, Hidan was immortal & could cast that curse jutsu, Itachi had the Mangekyo, Nagato had the Rinnegan, etc. And to be fair, I realize that unless someone can put pressure on the powerhouse characters, the fighting would be boring, so I'm not sure if there's a great solution to this. Occasionally I can accept when such characters appear, as Black Zetsu (I'm assuming he is this "Favored Son" character) is just the sort of character who would know how to accomplish this.
Aside from that small wrinkle, I can't help but really dig this story! It's so much more satisfying than Canon Naruto that I can't help but regard it as massive improvement. It makes nearly every character more enjoyable and competent. Naruto, while not exactly a genius, is competent and actually grows as the story progresses. Characters like Sakura, TenTen and Kiba aren't relegated to a worthless status. Lesser characters like Mabui and Samui, in addition to the Jinchuriki Fu & Yugito, are actually fleshed out (not to mentioned, fleshed in, hehe hehe -bloody nose-). And the way you fit in the events of the movies, filler characters and add new characters (like that Priestess Momo) makes it feel like not everything revolves around what's going on in the Elemental Nations.
Keep up the awesome work! The only way I can resist my impatience for new chapters is by rereading the series.
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