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During his training trip, Naruto is given a scroll which holds the secrets in how to seduce and ensnare women. A scroll he uses at first on the women and kunoichi around him but soon on the Shinob...
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(#) Zujinbo_Hinuga 2017-05-31
I had sent the following to your Deviant account, that may have been a bad on my part so allow me to repost it here. "i've seen rather frequently you use the word intuitive when you mean initiative. I was hoping you would correct yourself but as I am currently on chapter 83 and it still hasnt been caught felt i need to intervene. the occasional typo is one thing and i tend to read between the lines when you mix up him, her, his, her in the midst of very busy segments of... intimacy. but this is something you kind of just toss around all over.
for clarity,
intuitive - derived from intuition: meaning a kind of sixth sense or subconscious reading of a situation
initiative - to take action on one's own.
in example. upon arriving home, Naruto was able to intuit (present verb tense of intuition) that Kushina and Ino had taken the initiative in deciding the course their shared evening would take.
Kakashi's intuition told him that an ambush was imminent so decided to take the initiative and sent shadow clones ahead to lure out the rival ninja.
all in all, enjoy the lemon, not so much the Iruka scene, but it did lead to some juicy character portrayal in the forms of how people coped.
sincerely
the 4 tailed lizard
Zujinbo Hinuga"
in addition, I would like to say, I look forward to a sidestory or bonus chapter involving a mother/daughter get together in which tier and the triplets come to a similar bond as kiyomi with naruko and sage. also, if that becomes a thing.
I think it'd be cool to have Mira decide to have some "daughters" too in the form of Lala, Nana, and Momo Deviluke from the To Love Ru series. I apologize if you dont care for suggestions such as this, i'm kinda new here having just binge read starting a month and a half to two months ago and not really normally being one to check reviews. but i have to say, as someone who wasnt immediately familiar with mirajane from not being overly familiar with fairy tail, it immediately made me think of her being the fill-in mother of the Deviluke sisters and thinking of how you could also put Yami (golden darkness) Mea (her little sister) and possibly even Nemesis (the original prototype).
my initial thoughts, vault research or Kabuto research into weaponizing bijuu, but if you like the idea of adding them then i'm sure you'd find a good way to include them.
also, if you hadn't read To Love Ru, its a funny Rom-Com/school-slice of life style manga that tortures a high school freshman with a rather unfortunate(or highly fortunate) perchance for stumbling, falling, and tripping his way into compromising positions on top of easily angered attractive young women. all the while teasing him with the temptation of a harem due to a would-be engagement to an interstellar princess while he fawns over his boyhood crush.
and just now thinking of it, while it'd be possibly weird to try and shoehorn it into eroninja, it'd be pretty adorable/funny to see ero-nin Nel playing with Celine(sentient plant creature given semi-human form due to a desire to be closer to Rito. again 2LuvRu). maybe a sapling from furofuki survived and ended up growing naturally into its own as opposed to a forced clone of furofuki?Eroninja
(#) Snafusam 2017-07-18
Hell YES~ The possibility of the opportunity-grabbing Raikage to noose himself by attacking Yugito during the ceremony that is already being prepared for... Priceless!
Theory's of how the preparations/battle will leave A(Raikage's easily forgotten name) ...
1. On the receiving end of the Jinchiruki+Bijuu+new Akatsuki wanting his head-on-a-plate, being barely protected by the "alliance/Kohona diplomacy". blackmail scene if he survives? or will his pride hang him?
2. Dead~! At the hands of who..? Do we/you want him dead!?
3. Successful!? how would he successfully grab Yugito during that situation... how long would they be able to keep her? would they realize that there is no bijuu in her to steal?
4. Barely slipping out of the noose by diplomatically sticking to the "Here to 'support' Yugito" excuse after the battle ends.
i can't wait to now how that battle is going to unfold! Moegi finally Joins the 'Club N'! wonder if the fangirls have a chance...
Eroninja
(#) Newboy 2017-07-19
I am not sure if my review is getting through so I will add it again.
I just read chapter 86, at this point I am hoping they have Suzume teach Naruto the technique she used on him to block his cum from releasing allowing the pressure to build up.
If Suzume is redeemed later they should have Naruto use the same technique on Suzumme for a bit as punishment, blocking her cum from releasing allowing the pressure to build up. If she starts to feel truly guilty for what happened she may even request it as part of her punishment
A good chapterEroninja
(#) Newboy 2017-07-20
Two things, first will Naruto eventually get the Rinnigan?
Second I hope that when the real Madara Uchiha comes back he realizes black zetsu has his own agenda forcing Zetsu to resurrect Kaguya a different way.Author's response
No, I do not enjoy stories where a character that already enjoys almost every benefit of being the main character, needs even more poweups handed to him.
Can't really say one way or another, after all there's no guarantee Madara is coming back.Eroninja
(#) rperodin 2017-07-22
Hello. Lost track of you when our story dropped from FF. Rediscovered it recently on FF but under a different author; IndraSama. The chapters on FF are updated after here. If it's you using a pseudonym then fine. If not, you should eradicate this usurper and reclaim your rightful place on FF. The mongrels that caused the purge on FF years ago seem to have gone and good stories such as yours are making a comeback.Eroninja
(#) Newboy 2017-07-25
I have been slowly reading the entire story from beginning to end again as it has been a while, I still have a long way to go.
I like it how despite all the girls that are getting involved, Naruto's charismatic and loving personality in a world that quite frankly is one of the most broken and messed up worlds I have read about, mean that this Family is coming together and growing in a realistic manner.
There is one question I have, Madara Uchiha, when he and Naruto finally meet I expect it to be explosive. Naruto and Madara, the real Madara have some similar personality traits, Itachi himself pointed this out. Madara is everything Naruto could have become, and Vise verca, I look forward to the epic battle that results from there meeting.
I have always considered Madara to be naruto's real enemy, not kaguya, Kaguya was simply an entity longing to be reborn that used black zetsu to hijack Madara's plan for her own purpose, but the driving will and force behind everything bad that happened in naruto's time was Madara. I am hoping that it becomes apparent in your story, I look forward to more.Eroninja
(#) Planeshunter 2017-07-26
Heya!
Just wanted to say how much I enjoy this story. Actually, dunno if this counts as good or bad, but I find myself so engrossed by the plot that often skim over or plain skip the lemon to advance it faster (ehehe...)
Still, I'd like to point out how frustrating can feel for new readers to try to keep up with the 'limelight' chapters. Wouldn't it be better to include them in the main story? Or at least have some cues so we know where they are supposed to go (There aren't any cues I've missed, right? that would be embarrassing...)
Anyway, keep up the good work!
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