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Faerie Craft
(#) wretchedmongrel 2006-07-28
I've a soft spot for Harry/OC and the whole fealty thing you've come up with is a new plot device for me. It's also one that I'd love to see more of. You've a few minor typos and I might suggest being a touch less descriptive - not in what you say but in how many things you choose to describe. Otherwise 5 star work! Here's looking for more! :-DFaerie Craft
(#) Giovanni8834 2006-07-29
Please put spaces in between your paragraphs. It will make your story more readable.
Like this
See spaces between paragraphs.
As for the story itself, I thought it was interesting, good OC... I'm not a big Snape fan (I hate the greasy bastard) but he's tolerable as long as the story starts developing.Faerie Craft
(#) ilex 2006-10-22
Her old master is lucky to just have a headache when he wakes up. I f Severus ro Dumbledore ever see him again, he'll know what it feels like to have the living snot beat outta them!
There, my ranting and raving is done.
Good chapter and I theink this story is gonna just get better and better!Faerie Craft
(#) JustAReader 2006-12-22
please write more I'd like to see where this goes,It's a good ficFaerie Craft
(#) gadriam 2007-01-19
Highly enjoyable.
From the dates, i assume this story has been abandoned, and that's a crying shame. I sense great potential here, and unfortunatelly that tends to lead to writer's blocks, i know. The girl is quite credible as a halfhuman, and Snape has a certain credibility as well, in that he seems to be a good, but not very nice, person. Stern, not rough. The girl is not very credible as human, since she still had enough fight in her to ask for help. A human girl would have been broken, and i believe her degradation should have been on the NC-17 scale as well. Less is not absolutely incredible, but close. I would guess Fae are more resilient. I would dearly love to read more.
May Robert Lind in Kramfors bless your keyboard.
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