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But...I love you.
(#) Kaida_R 2013-02-14
Gak!!! How dare you trick me like that! I'm like YES THERE'S MORE! and you're like no there's NOT! Go review! D:
Anyway, fantastic chapter! Your writing our great, i keep wondering what's next!I I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!
Also, one little bit of constructive criticism, I like the pace personally, but it seme to be moving kinda fast, like in one chapter he recalled hr didn't love her any more, and walked out. In one chapter!I was left wondering why there wasn't more build . So, i guess that's something you can consider in future chapters? Your writing, great, can only Get better :)up
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