(#) ghostreader 2013-03-16I like how you've started, but you need to go back and review the names. You have Ben and Julie in this chapter instead of Kira and Lacus.
Author's responseSorry about that, the lemon in that chapter was originally meant for another story, but I recycled it for this one and I guess I forgot to check sure to see if I changed all meantions of the names. I'll try to fix it later on.
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