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Chapter 17 A Kiss Goodbye, Your Twisted Shell
5 reviewsThe van is stuck on the side of the road. First are revealed and Tristan has another nightmare and doesn't want to talk about it. Gerard doesn't know what to do about their relationship. He and Tri...
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(#) tdeeley 2013-02-09
YES!!!!
I woke up with like the worlds biggest hangover this morning and then i saw this and it instantly cheered me up!! Thank you so much :)
this was amazing, I thought her nightmare was real I had tears burning my eyes dude!
And when Gerard was breathing on Tritans ear and neck I got chills down my spine and I got all giggly and fangirly haha.
Update soon please (and thankyou for updating this fast, I noticed :3)
T xoxoAuthor's response
You are very welcome. The Next one should be up soon. I have the outline done!!!Awake and Unafraid
(#) glostick86 2013-02-09
wow.....
i almost feel apart cause i thought she really did end her life.
thank god that was just a dream.
i thought it was pretty funny that gerard's first kiss was with a girl named gloria.
hahaha thats my real name.
boy how i wish that were true.
lol.
update soon k.Author's response
THat is awesome!!!Awake and Unafraid
(#) kirziwirzi98 2013-02-11
Well I was hoping she wasn't really dead :] Your lucky! or I would have hunted you down and taken away all your cookies! :D I'm messing :]
I looooooooove this story soooo much!!
Update soon! :]Author's response
NO she's here to stay!!!! I promise!
Thank you for reading and commenting!Awake and Unafraid
(#) jack-the-ripper 2013-02-12
Ha, I cracked up at Frank's 'yeah you better be', sometimes I forget that Tristan is Frank's little sister and then reading that and realizing how fucking awkward it would be to be dragged into a conversation like that with your siblning sitting not two feet from you.. :D
I loved the beginning, the dream, it took my breath away. it was confusing and inconsistant as dreams usually are, she had no idea what had happened or where she was or why she did the things she did.. it was scary, and haunting in a way.
I keep getting these warm fuzzy feelings whenever Gerard and Trist are close to each other, so it was a perfect way to end the chapter!
By the way, have you noticed that even though all the chapters have gone green (as they fucking should,too) the story itself says unrated. It bugs me to end, really, cause it should show as green and rated 5 in the feed sfor the world of ficwaddians to see.. :/Author's response
It should be green, but it's ok. I hope you guys continue to read it even though! I know it has some readers because you guys are amazing and you comment and I fucking love that.
Yea Frank is showing his big brother pants there. I thought it was funny.
I love writing dream sequences. They are crazy and haunting and just all over the place.
Thank you so much for always reading and commenting. I love you soo much, hah!!!Awake and Unafraid
(#) jack-the-ripper 2013-02-13
haha oh I will be here waiting for more chapters til the day you announce the story has come to an end... and then like a week after that, whining and squealing until you give up and promise to write a sequel or something! :DAuthor's response
Have I told you how much I adore you?! You are a fantastic and loyal reader and I love you!
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