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Guy all the bad guys want.
2 reviewsHigh school isn't easy, we all know that. But what happens when Frank meets someone that can change his life forever? ::EVENTUAL FRERARD::
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Guy all the bad guys want.
(#) RyanCyanideKiller 2013-03-27
Hey, look! I'm reviewing!
So, I like the topic so far. However, it feels a tad bit choppy. Try and make the paragraphs and sentences flow a little more.
I do like it.Guy all the bad guys want.
(#) Echelonkid30 2013-04-10
It's time for awesome time with Chelsea, ba dum tss. I like the plot, it's kewl, but maybe to improve you could add more description because there's a lot of just talking and dialogue.
From your queen,
Chelsea xo
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