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A Mischievous Kiss
5 reviewsMidnight musings over the two women in his life lead Inuyasha to do something he's never quite done before. (Inuyasha/Kagome, slight Inuyasha/Kikyou)
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A Mischievous Kiss
(#) InuKag 2006-08-03
I enjoyed this.
you should add more to it.
it was funny and i was entertained for a bit.A Mischievous Kiss
(#) Ithilwen 2006-08-03
It's not immediately apparent that this is takign place in Kagome's bedroom. Maybe play up the blankets vs. sleeping bag angle.
The introspective portion is insightful but it's nothing new.
"even better than his daydreams of kicking Naraku's ass into Hell."
Hehehehehe! I can see Inuyasha thinking of kissing in those terms.
Eh? Kagome's actions seem a bit illogical, even by her reckonings.
This is a good story for a quiet mind.Author's response
Thank you very much for the wonderful and insightful review! This was one of the first IY stories I ever wrote, way back in 2003. Writing them was still very new then, so I was having a harder time dealing with the characterization of Kagome and a few others. Thank you for the insight and it's stuff I will keep in mind as I start to dabble back into writing Inuyasha.A Mischievous Kiss
(#) quirkyslayer 2006-08-08
Awesome! I don't know if I've ever read this before. Well, you got me over here. This site looks better set up than Fichaven.
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