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• And As The Sun Went Down

  (#) HatedEyes 2013-05-13

  TAVROS
  DID YOU WRITE MY IMMORTAL TOO

  Author's response

  Isnt my immortal a evanscence song?
  I dnt lyk evanescence :L

• And As The Sun Went Down

  (#) HatedEyes 2013-05-14

  ^^^^^^^^
  
  And this, my dears, is how you out-troll a troll.

  Author's response

  wat da fuk cnt i uplod a story wifout bein cald a troll? I just luv ritin so lev me alon! D:

• And As The Sun Went Down

  (#) StandUpAndScream 2013-05-14

  Well this is interesting.

  Author's response

  ok fanks :3

• And As The Sun Went Down

  (#) HatedEyes 2013-05-14

  Wow. Wow. Wow.
  
  My best friend is sitting beside me, I showed her this, and all she could say was "go back to primary school, stupid." And I agree. My 11-year-old brother can write better than you. My best friend's 10-year-old sister can write better than you. I COULD WRITE BETTER THAN YOU WHEN I WAS 4, FOR FUCK'S SAKE.
  
  If you want to write, Tavros, then get a bloody dictionary, or actually take writing seriously.
  
  Now, I'm off to go bury my face in lively, fluffy muppet buttock.
  
  -Dave fucking Strider.

  Author's response

  fuk u im not fukin stupid if u dnt lyk my story den fyn but dont take it out on me.
  y r u bein so meen 2 me? i have lurnin dificultees nd its nt my folt. i just wnt 2 rite. i hv sum rly difcult things goin on nd ritin is an escap. i dnt car hw bad i am. its jus nice to leev dis wurld for a wile.
  fukin cunt.

• And As The Sun Went Down

  (#) NothingToProve 2013-05-14

  TAVROS
  YOU NO CALL DAVE A CUNT
  GODDAMMIT
  GET YOUR SHIT TOGETHER

  Author's response

  WAT DA HEL IS TAVROS

• And As The Sun Went Down

  (#) HatedEyes 2013-05-14

  EXACTLY.
  THANK YOU, JOHN.
  SERIOUSLY, TAVROS.

  Author's response

  IM FUKIN CONFUSD WATS TAVROS?

• And As The Sun Went Down

  (#) turntechGodhead 2013-05-14

  I LOVE THIS USERNAME.

  Author's response

  Fank u :3

• And As The Sun Went Down

  (#) NothingToProve 2013-05-14

  YES DAVE
  WHAT SHALL WE DO TO TAVROS
  
  TAVROS
  WE TOLD YOU HOW MUCH NOT TO DO THIS SHIT?

  Author's response

  i don't fukin no wat tavros is.
  lev me alon nd let me rite.

• And As The Sun Went Down

  (#) turntechGodhead 2013-05-14

  I love how you seriously don't know what the fuck is going on.
  
  TAVROS.
  WE WILL FUCK YOU UP, MOTHERFUCKER.

  Author's response

  i luv how ur an ashole

• And As The Sun Went Down

  (#) turntechGodhead 2013-05-14

  And for the record:
  
  'Caflik' is spelt 'catholic'.
  'Wna' is spelt 'wanna'.
  'Fukin' is spelt 'fucking'.
  'Wat' is spelt 'what'.
  'Da' is spelt 'the'.
  'Stupid' is spelt 'you'.

  Author's response

  its not my folt i hav lurning difcultees.
  cant i rite wifout bein hated on?
  yes i no im stupid but its not my folt. i get bulied at skool becaus of it. i lyk writin and listenin to music becaus its an escape and it maks me furget abut the bulies.
  and my frend just told me that its Catholic with a capitl C.

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